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A Few More Footles

Lets meet My treat. She died We cried. Trapeze Don't sneeze. Lent fast Wont last. Blown leaves Bare trees. Roulette Place bet. Strip tease Weak knees. Sunday You pray. Babe Wakes Sleep breaks. Work shy Bye bye. Contest Who's best. Jobs done Now fun. Bewitched Nose twitched. Team wins Big grins. Mask off Don't cough.
Written 2nd October 2020.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Anaya Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Great footles of fun! my favorite "Bewitched Nose twitched." Enjoyed your foootles Tom! And awesome picture.
Cunningham Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Thank you Anaya, you should try them, they're quite addictive once you start. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2020 at 10:45 AM
Hello Tom, i have enjoued thes Footies. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Hello Tom I do enjoy your footise. Enjoy your day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 1:03 AM
Thank you very much Darlene, im pleased you liked them. Hope you're well Tom
Y. Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 3:26 PM
Hi Tom, You did a good job with your string of footles. Nice flow and content. This is one of my favorite forms:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 1:13 AM
Thank you Alexis, very addictive once you start. Tom.
Laurie Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:15 PM
G’day Tom … you’ve certainly built up an interesting log of footles - well done and stay safe Tom - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:19 PM
Thank you very much Lindsay, im happy you enjoyed them. Hope alls well. Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Fun to read! Quick and breezy!
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:42 PM
Thank you Caren, very addictive once you start. Glad you liked them. Tom.
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 9:00 AM
fab fun footles I especially love the last one:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Ha ha, it's true! I blame you two for my new addiction.
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Jan, we've infected John Watts with the footle virus lol. Tom
Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 8:48 AM
From wonderful limericks to wonderful footles to every single style you post is wonderful Tom, Kudos my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, I'm happy that you enjoyed them. Tom
Raiser Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 1:47 AM
That's some zingers :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Thank you very much Belden, they're very addictive when you start writing them. You should give them a go. Hope you're weekend going well. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:25 PM
You are very adept at these footles, Tom. Well writ. ~~
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:48 AM
Thank you Victor, im glad you enjoyed them. Tom
Watt Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 10:08 PM
I tip my cap to your mastery, Tom. Loved the last one best, but I'm celebrating the weekend with " Jobs done / Now fun." You reign / again. Cheers ~ John
Watt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 11:56 AM
I'm sure the muse will awaken to shake more apples off of this fertile tree. Have a great week sir.
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:47 AM
Thank you very much John, im running low on ideas now, my footle stream is in danger of drying up. Hope you have a great weekend. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 9:53 PM
Nice job Tom! I hope you and yours are well!
Cunningham Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:46 AM
Thank you very much Timothy, I hope you and yours are too, not long back from Turkey so havent been as active on here as I'd like to be. Tom
Faulkner Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 7:23 PM
Your bite-sized rhymes are the perfect afternoon treat, my favorite is 'Blown leaves/bare trees' - it is autumn! (but that last one really hits home!)
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Michelle, glad you enjoyed them, lol that last one, a sign of the times. Hope you're well, Tom
Mcconnell Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Great pen Tom, really original and compelling. Hope all is well with you, Blessings always,Gordon
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Gordon, glad you enjoyed them, all good here, lots of rain today, hope you fared better, enjoy your weekend Tom
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Enjoyed the sound of your foottle, Tom--meaningful pairing of rhythms and emotions.
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Thank you Vijay, im happy you liked them. Tom
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Great, Tom.. Love the images with the FOOTLES You are so good at these Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Panagiota, Im running out of ideas now, need to charge my footle battery lol. Tom
Hinshaw Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:50 AM
You're on a roll with the footles, Tom. Nice job - enjoyed. Bob
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Thank you very much Bob, im happy you enjoyed them, hope all is well. Tom
James Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Another fine set of footles Tom, Hope your keeping well, Emilia : ) x
Cunningham Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Emilia, glad you liked them, missing Turkey though, hasn't stopped raining all day. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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