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Eight Words
Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 July 21
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Image: N/A

A Fell Star Three Bags Full

Frayed border prints paste illusion, worn-out inks swirling bleeds, The hauls, stareways, persuasion, privileged balconies. Antiquities of read reviews, claims of a rustic quill, to scribbled marks a light verse muse, and forever bestill. I hear the silence of the slams, satirical critics, synthetic irony exams, stardoms paralytics. It dominates its point to rise, where life did emanate, afeared facade recital trice, timeless collaborate. A reenactment of Bo Peep, tough be a ruminant. My first part, blossom -- was a sheep, I was magnificent.
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Anaya Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 2:43 PM
You got first placement, William, congratulations! Brilliant rhymes and well put together. ~Love
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Thanks Anaya, my silent screen regaling 3-stanzas full, and I'm stuck with blossom for my last???/! Aloha William
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Love the rustic quill. A fave! Congrats, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 11:13 AM
You're a fine blessed soul Kim, thank you. Aloha William
Woods Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Yay! Congratulations! Love your rhymes. Xoxo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Thanks, Crystol. A pleasant way to start a weekend. Aloha William
Dutta Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:52 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. It's UNIQUE. Simply EXCELLENT.. Blessings.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Mahalo Anisha, for your thought filled sharing. Aloha William
Goldsmith Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your 8 word write.  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Blessings Paula, for your kind share and to your weekend as well. Aloha, William
mysore Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations. Magnificent it is dear poet.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, thriveni, you are a good soul. Aloha, William
May Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:57 AM
Thanks, Joseph. Fun as always. Aloha, William
Narain Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 10:46 AM
gREAT POEM WITH CREATIVE USE OF EIGHT REQUIRED WORDS.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 3:49 AM
Thank you, Blossom was tough, lastly, I made it a sheep. Aloha William
Buhagiar Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 8:10 AM
Brilliant entry for the contest. You embodied those chosen words into a spectacular poem. Best for a win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, the words perspectives were broad [rustic-synthetic] so I thought best to bring past-present, but [blossom] I saw it as fresh and not inanimate, thus I made it a sheep--by name, nonetheless, a sheep. Aloha William.
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