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Eight Words
Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 July 21
Sponsored by: Joseph May
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Frayed border prints paste illusion, worn-out inks swirling bleeds, The hauls, stareways, persuasion, privileged balconies. Antiquities of read reviews, claims of a rustic quill, to scribbled marks a light verse muse, and forever bestill. I hear the silence of the slams, satirical critics, synthetic irony exams, stardoms paralytics. It dominates its point to rise, where life did emanate, afeared facade recital trice, timeless collaborate. A reenactment of Bo Peep, tough be a ruminant. My first part, blossom -- was a sheep, I was magnificent.

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Date: 7/29/2024 2:43:00 PM
You got first placement, William, congratulations! Brilliant rhymes and well put together. ~Love
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2024 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Anaya, my silent screen regaling 3-stanzas full, and I'm stuck with blossom for my last???/! Aloha William
Date: 7/27/2024 11:02:00 AM
Love the rustic quill. A fave! Congrats, William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2024 11:13:00 AM
You're a fine blessed soul Kim, thank you. Aloha William
Date: 7/27/2024 10:21:00 AM
Yay! Congratulations! Love your rhymes. Xoxo
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Date: 7/27/2024 10:33:00 AM
Thanks, Crystol. A pleasant way to start a weekend. Aloha William
Date: 7/27/2024 8:52:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. It's UNIQUE. Simply EXCELLENT.. Blessings.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2024 10:28:00 AM
Mahalo Anisha, for your thought filled sharing. Aloha William
Date: 7/27/2024 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your 8 word write.  Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Date: 7/27/2024 10:12:00 AM
Blessings Paula, for your kind share and to your weekend as well. Aloha, William
Date: 7/27/2024 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations. Magnificent it is dear poet.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2024 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, thriveni, you are a good soul. Aloha, William
Date: 7/27/2024 4:55:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/27/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. Fun as always. Aloha, William
Date: 7/21/2024 10:46:00 AM
gREAT POEM WITH CREATIVE USE OF EIGHT REQUIRED WORDS.
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Date: 7/22/2024 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, Blossom was tough, lastly, I made it a sheep. Aloha William
Date: 7/21/2024 8:10:00 AM
Brilliant entry for the contest. You embodied those chosen words into a spectacular poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 7/21/2024 12:47:00 PM
Thank you, the words perspectives were broad [rustic-synthetic] so I thought best to bring past-present, but [blossom] I saw it as fresh and not inanimate, thus I made it a sheep--by name, nonetheless, a sheep. Aloha William.
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