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A feather lost glides, drifting, it soars, in the mighty wind it twirls and swirls as if dancing, oh once, THE PEOPLE, owned all the wilderness, they called it home, and now it is being destroyed. High upon a sheer, jagged cliff a horse, of many colors stands majestic under the azure sky, and an Ojibwa girl looks at the land of her Canada, where below the Ottawa River thunders and roars. In the wind that howls, eagle feathers, in her raven hair and on her horse are fluttering, and in the sky above eagles fly and screech, to symbolize her ancestors great spirit and strength. And in my dream, I am that Ojibwa girl, who stands upon that cliff with her horse and feathers. _________________________________ September 25, 2016 Poetry/Verse/A Feather Lost Copyright Protected, ID 16-833-434-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym NA in Contest # 211, finalized 9/26/2016 Submitted to the contest, Any poem that got NA'd in a September 2016 Contest, sponsor Janice Carnerdy Third Place

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Date: 9/30/2016 8:27:00 AM
this is so descriptive, Constance. I love it, BIG congrats. soupmail
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:45:00 AM
love this poem about all things nature-and I always love visiting Canada! We always enjoy ourselves :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:46:00 PM
Congratulations Constance! A well deserved win.
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:29:00 PM
Constance, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/25/2016 9:15:00 PM
The fragments are beautiful. I was drawn in and held by each line. Crisp and lovely - and somehow spiritual ... CayCay
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