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A Feast For the Eyes

the snow a clean plate
    trace rabbit tracks forked by wings~
              an owl’s repast served




2021.10.15

birdfoodhaiku

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Paghunda Zahid

November 6, 2021 at 8:21 AM

Clever... Vivid imagery... Very well penned

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 8, 2021 at 5:09 AM

Thank you! xomo

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

October 22, 2021 at 7:10 AM

Wow repast served on a cold cold platter, what a creative way to capture the scene!! Kudos for this awesome haiku. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too .^^^^^^^<<<<<<<>>>>>>•°»

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 8, 2021 at 5:08 AM

Thank you! xomo

Jeff Connelly

October 20, 2021 at 10:13 AM

Simply wonderful imagery here Maureen. Such is the bird life, as your words give such "life". (Forgive my digression, but Yogi Barre once said, "If you find a fork in the road; take it." ALWAYS thanks for your poetic thoughts Maureen. A blessing in my life. HUGS...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 21, 2021 at 6:34 AM

Thank you dear! xomo <3

Karen Jones

October 20, 2021 at 1:31 AM

Enjoyed this vivid haiku! Congrats

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 21, 2021 at 6:33 AM

Thanks you Karen! xomo

Judy Ball

October 18, 2021 at 4:59 PM

Super job. Excellent. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 19, 2021 at 1:23 PM

Thank you Judy! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

October 18, 2021 at 1:03 PM

Nicely done. love that word Repast that you used! congrats on the win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 19, 2021 at 1:23 PM

Thank you Andrea! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

October 18, 2021 at 11:41 AM

Happy to return with congratulations, well earned-

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 19, 2021 at 1:22 PM

Thank you Lovely! xomo

Sam Kauffman

October 18, 2021 at 10:08 AM

Mo, congratulations on your win - the reality of nature brought into focus. All the best.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 19, 2021 at 1:22 PM

Thank you Sam! xomo :),

Paulette Calasibetta

October 17, 2021 at 2:00 PM

Fabulous haiku.....Congratulations on your well deserved win. You paint an awesome picture. Blessings, Paulette

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 18, 2021 at 7:58 AM

Thank you Paulette! ~Maureen

Robert James Liguori

October 17, 2021 at 12:47 PM

Excellent imagery, I am so happy I was able to read and place this clever poem.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 17, 2021 at 1:44 PM

Thank you so much Robert, for the prompt and for my placement, I am thrilled! My muse has been a recluse, but it couldn’t refuse a bird haiku. ~Maureen

Susan Ashley

October 17, 2021 at 12:15 PM

Dear Mo, you've captured the brute beauty of Nature with your skilled pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Robert's contest. Warmest wishes, my lovely.. ~Susan <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 17, 2021 at 1:44 PM

Thank you Susan! Warm hugs Lovely ~xomo