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the snow a clean plate trace rabbit tracks forked by wings~ an owl’s repast served 2021.10.15

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Date: 11/6/2021 8:21:00 AM
Clever... Vivid imagery... Very well penned
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Date: 11/8/2021 5:09:00 AM
Thank you! xomo
Date: 10/22/2021 7:10:00 AM
Wow repast served on a cold cold platter, what a creative way to capture the scene!! Kudos for this awesome haiku. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too .^^^^^^^<<<<<<<>>>>>>•°»
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Date: 11/8/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you! xomo
Date: 10/20/2021 10:13:00 AM
Simply wonderful imagery here Maureen. Such is the bird life, as your words give such "life". (Forgive my digression, but Yogi Barre once said, "If you find a fork in the road; take it." ALWAYS thanks for your poetic thoughts Maureen. A blessing in my life. HUGS...
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Date: 10/21/2021 6:34:00 AM
Thank you dear! xomo <3
Date: 10/20/2021 1:31:00 AM
Enjoyed this vivid haiku! Congrats
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Date: 10/21/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thanks you Karen! xomo
Date: 10/18/2021 4:59:00 PM
Super job. Excellent. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/19/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Judy! xomo
Date: 10/18/2021 1:03:00 PM
Nicely done. love that word Repast that you used! congrats on the win.
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Date: 10/19/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! xomo
Date: 10/18/2021 11:41:00 AM
Happy to return with congratulations, well earned-
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Date: 10/19/2021 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Lovely! xomo
Date: 10/18/2021 10:08:00 AM
Mo, congratulations on your win - the reality of nature brought into focus. All the best.
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Date: 10/19/2021 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Sam! xomo :),
Date: 10/17/2021 2:00:00 PM
Fabulous haiku.....Congratulations on your well deserved win. You paint an awesome picture. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Paulette! ~Maureen
Date: 10/17/2021 12:47:00 PM
Excellent imagery, I am so happy I was able to read and place this clever poem.
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert, for the prompt and for my placement, I am thrilled! My muse has been a recluse, but it couldn’t refuse a bird haiku. ~Maureen
Date: 10/17/2021 12:15:00 PM
Dear Mo, you've captured the brute beauty of Nature with your skilled pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Robert's contest. Warmest wishes, my lovely.. ~Susan <3
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Susan! Warm hugs Lovely ~xomo
Date: 10/17/2021 3:32:00 AM
You nailed this one Super Mo, Talons and all, superb imagery congratulations, cheers David
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:45:00 PM
Thank you David :))) xomo!
Date: 10/16/2021 10:16:00 PM
Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Regina! Warm hugs ~xomo
Date: 10/16/2021 6:15:00 PM
Rabbit on ice. Congratulations, IR!
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Lovely! Warm hugs ~xomo
Date: 10/16/2021 5:06:00 PM
excellent in Mo!, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Hugs! xomo :),
Date: 10/16/2021 8:58:00 AM
Good job Maureen, bring on the CSI team
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Date: 10/16/2021 1:26:00 PM
;))) thank you John! xomo
Date: 10/16/2021 7:20:00 AM
Beauty in the perceived cruelty of nature! A phenomenal haiku Maureen! I loved it!
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Date: 10/16/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Mike! xomo
Date: 10/15/2021 11:57:00 PM
You have shown the stark beauty of the arctic wild, so many sides to this-
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Date: 10/16/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Lovely! xomo
Date: 10/15/2021 9:35:00 PM
This gem needs at least reading over two days (Or at least I needed to sleep, then read AGAIN) shalom, shalom / Paz
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Date: 10/16/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Anil! warm hugs xomo
Date: 10/15/2021 9:34:00 PM
I think you deployed the "set table for sinner" brilliantly.
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Date: 10/15/2021 12:13:00 PM
close observation of this type makes one a Scientist. Death can be pretty? shalom, shalom Dear Sis in the LORD
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Date: 10/15/2021 11:32:00 AM
Moral: rabbits should be making love, not running around, after dark!
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Date: 10/16/2021 1:24:00 PM
Word! ;D, xomo!