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A Feast For the Eyes

the snow a clean plate trace rabbit tracks forked by wings~ an owl’s repast served 2021.10.15

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/6/2021 8:21:00 AM

Clever... Vivid imagery... Very well penned

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/8/2021 5:09:00 AM

Thank you! xomo

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/22/2021 7:10:00 AM

Wow repast served on a cold cold platter, what a creative way to capture the scene!! Kudos for this awesome haiku. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too .^^^^^^^<<<<<<<>>>>>>•°»

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/8/2021 5:08:00 AM

Thank you! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/20/2021 10:13:00 AM

Simply wonderful imagery here Maureen. Such is the bird life, as your words give such "life". (Forgive my digression, but Yogi Barre once said, "If you find a fork in the road; take it." ALWAYS thanks for your poetic thoughts Maureen. A blessing in my life. HUGS...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/21/2021 6:34:00 AM

Thank you dear! xomo <3

Karen Jones

Date: 10/20/2021 1:31:00 AM

Enjoyed this vivid haiku! Congrats

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/21/2021 6:33:00 AM

Thanks you Karen! xomo

Judy Ball

Date: 10/18/2021 4:59:00 PM

Super job. Excellent. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/19/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Judy! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2021 1:03:00 PM

Nicely done. love that word Repast that you used! congrats on the win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/19/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/18/2021 11:41:00 AM

Happy to return with congratulations, well earned-

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/19/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Lovely! xomo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2021 10:08:00 AM

Mo, congratulations on your win - the reality of nature brought into focus. All the best.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/19/2021 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Sam! xomo :),

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/17/2021 2:00:00 PM

Fabulous haiku.....Congratulations on your well deserved win. You paint an awesome picture. Blessings, Paulette

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/18/2021 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Paulette! ~Maureen

Robert James Liguori

Date: 10/17/2021 12:47:00 PM

Excellent imagery, I am so happy I was able to read and place this clever poem.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/17/2021 1:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert, for the prompt and for my placement, I am thrilled! My muse has been a recluse, but it couldn’t refuse a bird haiku. ~Maureen

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2021 12:15:00 PM

Dear Mo, you've captured the brute beauty of Nature with your skilled pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Robert's contest. Warmest wishes, my lovely.. ~Susan <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/17/2021 1:44:00 PM

Thank you Susan! Warm hugs Lovely ~xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/17/2021 3:32:00 AM

You nailed this one Super Mo, Talons and all, superb imagery congratulations, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/17/2021 1:45:00 PM

Thank you David :))) xomo!