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A Father's Voice

Boy at the lake's shore skims flat stones on its surface cups each oval how fast can he throw? to chart the toss mechanics of an arc to chase the horizon in pebble leaps His father's voice, an inward echo "That's it son, skip the stone with velocity!" "Release, spin, stabilize." "You know this lake well enough." Seven or eight stone skips that nip small waves to a bloated plop he searches for the next right stone its weight easy to handle varies his grip Can he do more in an altered state? A boy who knows what displaces gravity what sinks below the surface into the lake's darkness, the deepest kind to find his soul's reprieve when the script shifts when tears curl in the corners of his eyes for a lost voice that displaces the velocity of self Poem composed August 1/21 For Anthony Biaanco Contest: Stones

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Date: 8/16/2021 8:40:00 AM
Excellent job Brian...those moments
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/16/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thanks very much, John, for your encouraging response. Be well. Brian
Date: 8/15/2021 11:36:00 AM
Brian - Love it! Consistently you produce great writing and this, sir, is no exception.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/15/2021 2:46:00 PM
My sincerest appreciation, Gary. Seizing on metaphor meshed with the human experience help push the pen. Thank you, again. Brian
Date: 8/14/2021 11:53:00 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/14/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Sincerely. Brian
Date: 8/14/2021 10:32:00 AM
Congrats..very unique and powerful
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/14/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thanks very much for the recognition, Anthony. My hope was that the reader might see the tossed stone as a symbol of the boy's grief, but also a memory link to his lost father. Best wishes, Brian

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