A Father's Voice

Boy at the lake's shore
         skims flat stones on its surface
                     cups each oval
how fast can he throw?
         to chart the toss mechanics of an arc
         to chase the horizon in pebble leaps

His father's voice, an inward echo 
         "That's it son, skip the stone with velocity!"
         "Release, spin, stabilize."
         "You know this lake well enough."

 Seven or eight stone skips
          that nip small waves
          to a bloated plop
          he searches for the next right stone
          its weight easy to handle
          varies his grip
Can he do more in an altered state?

A boy who knows what displaces gravity
           what sinks below the surface
           into the lake's darkness, the deepest kind
           to find his soul's reprieve
           when the script shifts
           when tears curl in the corners of his eyes
           for a lost voice that displaces the velocity
                                                                  of self






Poem composed August 1/21
For Anthony Biaanco 
Contest: Stones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lawless Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Excellent job Brian...those moments
Sambourne Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Thanks very much, John, for your encouraging response. Be well. Brian
Radice Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Brian - Love it! Consistently you produce great writing and this, sir, is no exception.
Sambourne Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 2:46 PM
My sincerest appreciation, Gary. Seizing on metaphor meshed with the human experience help push the pen. Thank you, again. Brian
Alex Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Great Work. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thank you, Christuraj. Sincerely. Brian
Bianco Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Congrats..very unique and powerful
Sambourne Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Thanks very much for the recognition, Anthony. My hope was that the reader might see the tossed stone as a symbol of the boy's grief, but also a memory link to his lost father. Best wishes, Brian
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