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A False Questionku

<> <> golden LEAVES AROUND the ranch: <> Autumn leave's leaves <> -- <> <> you Leave the ranch in gold: <> see Are branches in their sleeves? them And / <> sway, --------- real- / <> ( ) ly / <> <> ---------- grow- / ing / <> golden old? / See, the b r a n c h in autumn to ! ! <> the Slips in a u t u m n sleeves; ground: ! ! And the r a n c h all golden dyeing ! ! <> their Sleeps on golden leaves little <><> death?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/8/2013 5:46:00 PM
This one made a GREAT shape. Nice meeting you today.
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Date: 3/9/2013 1:36:00 PM
Hey there! Just wanted to turn free verse into shape... Still wondering if it's a good idea... Couldn't resist... Hope it won't deceive anyone!? Love, Hanitra
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Date: 1/30/2013 7:47:00 PM
Hello Hanitra, just a note to say Hi and that I miss your visits. I hope all is well.
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Date: 1/4/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hi Hanitra! good to see ya! love this! jimbo
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Date: 1/3/2013 3:17:00 PM
Lovely..hope i didn't mess you up on the terenzella..my brain was mixing it up with the villanella! LOL Thanks so much for stoping by my writes. Light & Love
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Date: 1/2/2013 4:38:00 PM
Happy New Year Hanitra! Appreciated your comment on Mud Pie Sale. Peace be with you and yours.
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Hanitra for your comments. I guess I'm hooked on the " _ku" I 've been writing haikus since 1999. I just started writing questionkus. I honestly love this form of writing. Thanks again and have a happy new year.
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Date: 12/18/2012 9:10:00 AM
Hi Hanitra Thanks to your suggestion the Questionku is an official form on the soup.
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Date: 12/18/2012 9:12:00 AM
If you hadn't commented on my form I wouldn't have considered submitting.
Date: 11/29/2012 3:19:00 PM
i like this Hanitra, the form is slightly strange to me, but the content's of the poem i really like...
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Date: 11/28/2012 3:56:00 PM
Soup mail
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Date: 11/24/2012 7:11:00 AM
Hanitra this is reall cool, I like it a lot, well done...David
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Date: 11/22/2012 12:21:00 AM
I never tried the Questionku,it seems so very challenging and great.. thanks for stopping by my posts.. You definitely have a long nickname,too hard to remember.. so Voahanesque
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:01:00 AM
And now the summer's faded and springtime finally grieves. There's nothing left for us to do but watch as autumn leaves. Beautiful poem Hanitra.
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:22:00 AM
Soup mail.
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Date: 11/20/2012 7:30:00 PM
Hanitra! Hey, this is grand! Nice metaphors of nature's beauty! Love the first question the most! gwendolen
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Date: 11/18/2012 5:16:00 PM
No worries from me, rules are made to be bent, I am more interested in the emotions you have captured. Thanks as well for the advertisement, I would be thrilled if others gave it a try.
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Date: 11/18/2012 11:08:00 AM
Hi V, thanks for commenting on my poetry, I really appreciate that. Your poem here is amazing, well done, Constance
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:51:00 PM
wow... love the title, and what you did here.. the image is outstanding, golden like your thoughts... true beauty,,, always~pd
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Date: 11/14/2012 8:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one..I like the play on words which you so craftly used..Thanks so much for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2012 11:00:00 PM
this is sure unique. I like the ending a lot!
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