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A Falling Star

Black stones fall to earth My resolution this year Find a falling star By: Greg Stanley For New Years Resolution Ghetto Haiku Contest Sponsored By Indigo Dreamweaver I hunt meteorites in the California Deserts, and hope to find one in 2012. I have found some in the past, so I’m feeling confident

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David Williams

Date: 12/18/2011 12:01:00 PM

Greg congrats on your win, that's a great goal you have there, good luck with it..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/18/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Resolution Haiku" contest Greg. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2011 11:14:00 PM

Congrats, Greg, for this one I read earlier and really liked.

Tracy Edwards

Date: 12/17/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congrats on your 2nd place in my contest Greg with your interesting haiku.. I hope you catch your falling star xxx

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/17/2011 5:58:00 AM

Love your job choice, Greg...as least u aren't looking for these fallen stars somewhere else like ....the Gobi Desert. I love you resolution...somehow I thot this was related to finding true love at first...Great job! Have a Merry Christmas. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song
Date: 12/17/2011 5:59:00 AM

*your

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2011 10:12:00 PM

Now this is what I like to see. Resolutions not talking about diets. haha. Good luck in the contest with your cool haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:50:00 PM

I always enjoy reading your excellent poetry Greg. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/11/2011 4:42:00 PM

So many totally disintegrate when they enter earth's atmosphere. As long as we don't get any rocks the size of a football field or larger, then the earth will be in passable shape. We would have to send Bruce Willis, Ben Affleck, and the rest of the boys into space if we do get any. You have displayed a good haiku here.