a fall hiku

in front of us a patch packed with pumpkins . . . summer behind us

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Valsa George

Date: 6/7/2025 8:34:00 PM

Beautifully crafted haiku. Congratulations on your top win.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/7/2025 1:19:00 AM

A top win? Well done. You are always number one poet. Great imagery despite the short haiku.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/6/2025 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s contest softly anticipating autumn`s arrival. Wish you a pleasant weekend.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/6/2025 6:28:00 AM

Andrea, I love how it’s a perfect snapshot of transition, full of warmth and quiet reflection. Your nature-inspired words always bring a peaceful pause to my day. Spring Blessings, My Dear Andrea, Daniel

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/6/2025 12:09:00 AM

A great Haiku hailing the fall, Andrea.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/5/2025 8:00:00 PM

Beautiful hiku, so well written sweet andrea. I love how you've described fall so seamlessly! Excellent! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2025 7:49:00 PM

Fore and aft, as we sail into fall. Well-done, Andrea. Huzzah!

Jay Narain

Date: 6/5/2025 11:19:00 AM

Nice haiku. Fall is cooler and colorful.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/5/2025 10:56:00 AM

What a creative/fun write you have here. I hate the hot summer. Come on fall... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a lovely day writing away...............