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A Fall Day

fuzzy white slippers

   and a crackling fire

        warm me through

outside the wind picks up 

   rattling this and that

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Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2013 at 12:09 AM

this is a really cute one. A soupmail for ya. Please let me know right away about something!!!

Joseph Sergi

December 14, 2013 at 8:23 PM

perfect picture of winter nice poem Francine

Paddi March

December 11, 2013 at 2:30 PM

Straight to the point and wonderfully clear. When these are well done how they create such a crystal moment very nice.

Barbara Gorelick

November 1, 2013 at 8:55 PM

Warm and comforting...love it., BG

Russell Sivey

November 1, 2013 at 8:44 PM

Hot cocoa would do the trick to warm me up during a freezing cold day! I really enjoyed reading this very powerful poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!