A Fall Day

fuzzy white slippers and a crackling fire warm me through outside the wind picks up rattling this and that

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2013 12:09:00 AM

this is a really cute one. A soupmail for ya. Please let me know right away about something!!!

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/14/2013 8:23:00 PM

perfect picture of winter nice poem Francine

Paddi March

Date: 12/11/2013 2:30:00 PM

Straight to the point and wonderfully clear. When these are well done how they create such a crystal moment very nice.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/1/2013 8:55:00 PM

Warm and comforting...love it., BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/1/2013 8:44:00 PM

Hot cocoa would do the trick to warm me up during a freezing cold day! I really enjoyed reading this very powerful poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2013 1:05:00 PM

Reads like a great time on a fall day with the fuzzy white slippers..Sara