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A Fall

The season of autumn is the time for a fall So I fell in October, I gave you my all You caught me and smiled and I kissed your sweet lips Crisp air and sweaters and your softly curved hips I traced a finger over your collarbone You told me I never had to be alone We stood under a crimson canopy I told you that you were dear to me That’s when we first said the word ‘love’ We held hands to keep warm, yours fit me like a glove Apple cider, cardigans, I loved every minute But calling you my girlfriend was by far the best of it I got on my knees and made you my queen You told me to only say what I mean The beautiful landscape lifted our mood And in the splendor of fall our love was renewed

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Date: 10/1/2023 10:42:00 AM
Interesting take on the theme Lucia - very nice!! Congratulations! :)
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Lucia Ferris
Date: 10/1/2023 8:14:00 PM
thank you so much! :)
Date: 9/28/2023 6:37:00 PM
Lucia, I enjoyed your romantic fall poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Lucia Ferris
Date: 9/29/2023 7:44:00 AM
thank you so much!!!! :)

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