A Fairy Tale Heroine

The big, bad wolf wears a suit of gray with a snide smile. Standing upright, he believes himself to be debonaire as he takes his comb from his breast pocket and slicks back his hair. Why does he flash his pearly white fangs and file his claws 'til they're razor sharp? He smells the fear of docile creatures; he taunts the weak, stalking his prey while vultures circle overhead in waiting. The face of evil in a fairy tale with girls wearing red cloaks and shepherd boys watching their flocks on hillsides. Flames like daggers from his yellow eyes pierce the pastoral images. Clear skies become dark by his phantom-like shadows. He walks tall in black boots of Italian leather towering higher than treetops in their eyes beyond the echoes of his menacing laughter. The woodland creatures cower in their hiding places, yet hope for a glimpse of the beautiful princess in her dazzling horse-drawn carriage crossing the forest. Through the darkness, the ancient land shines like an emerald with fragrant flowers in bloom; the petals strewn her path in a storybook from a child's shelf between rainbow bookends. Surely, heavenly showers shall rain down on the land and good shall overcome evil with rainbows coloring the pages as an enchanted princess in a shimmering gown rights all wrongs, though her strength is not immediately evident. Melodious birds fly on the outskirts of the tale, orbiting the forest without fear, searching for the light. The princess, oblivious to danger, dances amongst the trees calling the shy creatures from their hiding places. She ignores the wolf's hideous laughter in a dream-state. Looking for her prince, she kisses a frog to no avail then spies three little pigs with curly tails and fearful eyes. They know the wolf too well. His gray suit coats the dreams of their happily ever afters. Our heroine, the princess, wipes their tears, rolls up her sleeves, and builds a brick fortress. She bravely changes history to her story not giving in to fear. Fear only fuels her adrenalin rush 'til the job is done. The wolf huffs and puffs, bites and claws unable to infiltrate. He eventually sulks off on all fours with his tail between his legs and is never heard from again. At least, not in this storyland. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders for Fairy Tails contest (Debbie Guzzi) *the wolf is personified

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/24/2012 6:39:00 PM
HA, boo.. wow...I can't help it.. Now your really gonna think, I'm stalking you... , congratulations In Debbie, Fairy Tail Contest"' it was an amazing hit ;-) have yourself a good one~PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations,Rhonda,for this great write.This is really superb......
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Date: 5/24/2012 10:33:00 AM
Congrats to you too, Rhonda, this one is really superb. Makes you feel like reading it again and again..:) Jag
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Date: 5/24/2012 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win...... George
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Date: 5/24/2012 9:57:00 AM
Seems more congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest are in order....again, I just loved reading this poem.
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Date: 5/24/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2012 2:23:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win, great story..David
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Date: 5/23/2012 10:43:00 AM
A suspenceful fairy tail...Congrats on your winning place in PD's contest with this one!!
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write!!!!! Lori
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Date: 5/23/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s "Long Poem" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 1:42:00 AM
THIS IS BEYOND OUTSTANDING!!! WOW,YOU ARE TRULY A FANTASTIC POET,SMH BRAVO!!!!!
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Date: 5/22/2012 10:17:00 PM
Rhonda, another wonderful win, Congratulations with your awesome long long poem! Thank you for supporting my contest. Good night ~*~ALWAYS * the one and only :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:11:00 PM
congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:28:00 PM
:) Well Done Rhonda!! Welcome Back!! I've missed you :) this is a delightful tale! best wishes in Debbie's contest! I love how you empowered the princess!! Brava! big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:48:00 PM
I love your fairy tails poem Rhonda.( You need not buy fantasy books to your children) Wish you luck in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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