A Faint Voice Whispers

Somewhere a faint voice whispers in the night
Every cruel secret it's been hiding from the light
No one suspects the darkness deep within 
The vile threats and the multitude of sin
All of this is kept out of sight

Who will draw back the long and ponderous veil?
When will there be a balance of the scale?
Still the sound carries on the restless wind
Somewhere a faint voice whispers

The hushed tones spoken are heard everywhere
The hot breath of hate fills the foul, rank air
It's the sound of madmen forged by design 
Crimes we've committed - they're yours and they're mine
You'll ne'er be rid of them, so have a care
Somewhere a faint voice whispers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/31/2009 10:15:00 AM
very profound piece of one having to live within their own sins and their own crimes captured very vividly, descripted very well great write
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Date: 1/31/2009 9:27:00 AM
Corinne, this is very well written. "The hushed tones spoken are heard everywhere The hot breath of hate fills the foul, rank air It's the sound of madmen forged by design Crimes we've committed - they're yours and they're mine" Vivid and chilling. I'm really enjoying reading your work. Donna G.
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