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The white-hot passion between them, their love affair Now tantamount to A candle's moribund flame... dirty dancing in the feeble wind struggling to reignite to no avail Flickering, then dying out. Erosion of lust is to blame. Mcwhirtle Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina Date written and submitted: 11/25/2019

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Date: 12/26/2019 2:39:00 PM
once the flame of desire goes out then I guess they will move on :-( Many congratulations on your win Edward, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2019 12:21:00 PM
Excellent write, Edward. Congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays to you and your family. All the best.. Charlie
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/24/2019 7:25:00 PM
Many thanks for my placement, Charles:-) Happy holidays to you as well!

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