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A Face of Furrowed Fields

the face I see is furrowed fields
as if dug deeply by the plow of
life penetrating into the soul
as seeds are planted to become
crops of experience alternating 
with joy and sorrow as the years 
passed by with health and pain 
of drought and floods which are 
ingrained upon the facade of the
man of furrowed fields

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/2/2018 12:00:00 PM
Sonia, guess we all want to grow older, but not old. I'ts sad that experience is the one thing we cannot get for nothing. Excellent write.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/2/2018 1:20:00 PM
Carlos, thank you for your uplifting comment on my poem, 'A Face of Furrowed Filelds.' Happy New Year. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/25/2017 9:06:00 AM
Well done Sonia, congratulations...
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Sonia Walker
Date: 10/25/2017 9:32:00 AM
Charlie, thank you for your kind comment on my poem, 'A Face of Furrowed Fields.' When I wrote this, I was thinking about deep character lines. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/22/2017 1:00:00 PM
Sonia, I will add this LOVELY poem to my favorites! Plow of life--love that. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Sonia Walker
Date: 10/22/2017 3:03:00 PM
Janice, your comment is so kind. Thank you for your congratulations. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 10/22/2017 6:24:00 AM
Greetings Sonia. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this splendid piece! ;-)
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Date: 10/22/2017 8:22:00 AM
Teddy, I woke up to your uplifting comment and congratulations which made my day, especially, before my first cup of coffee. Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 8/8/2017 7:04:00 AM
Excellent writing Sonia. Well done :)
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Date: 8/8/2017 9:20:00 AM
Heidi, thank you for your uplifting comment on my poem, 'A Face of Furrowed Fields.' ~ Sonia

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