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A Face Like Thunder POTD

I was a planetary climatologist, who studied climate variability and change,
Like sweet variability of stunning, green tulips, in lavish garden rearranged.

Studying the said effects on the biosphere, absorbed so many daily hours,
Like industrious days of fragrant, amber honey, after tumbling into flowers.

My labors impacted energy usage, along with food production and health,
And the survival of endangered species, like golden rays of natural wealth.

Faddish flowers fascinated friends, who flattered them, at my broad fence,
Under fleecy, lemony clouds, fast moving, and orange sun, grown intense.

Famished, feasible family feasted, in lavish flowering fragrance of Fridays,
When fugitive, frosty stars flickered, winking at green garden bonsai trees.

I lived in the house of emerald echoes, in vivid memory of nature's sound,
From birdsong to crickets to evening wind, and brook of babbling renown.

Sachets swept away a sudden sadness, as robins sought another summer,
On my street of starry-eyed forget me nots, like a tune with no drummer.

Nobody knew latest neighborhood news, like my nearest friends next door,
Like chameleon sun, crisscrossing teal sky, wholly ignorant of 'nevermore.'

Pink birds were living high, and red butterflies viewed a world, ultraviolet;
And yellow bees went about their sweet labors, since queen bee desired it.

Strawberry clouds sailed around the world, for clouds ever love adventure, 
As dogwoods barked in summer's dog days, during a gold noon surrender.

As I was walking home one day, the sun vanished as skies turned ominous.
There was a lightning flash just before the thunder, loud and cacophonous!

Suddenly, I saw a male face in the clouds, that was bellowing and enraged,
Like blizzard winds through naked trees, howling at a lush year that's aged.

Taken aback, like butterflies in gusts, I had come face to face with thunder-
The mighty, furious face of the storm, and I was filled with sudden wonder!

Then came the silver rains, sideways slanting, at the dead end of drought;
And I raced home like all uneasy nature, in the successive hours of doubt.

Scintillating sun had returned next day, after banishing the tangerine mist,
As benevolent nature was no more angry, its tale ending in an orange twist!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rolland Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 10:15 PM
a great poem, in communion with nature, always enjoy your poetry, thanks Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Thank you very much, Yann. :)
Roper Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:36 PM
Wonderful write, Evelyn, congratulations on POTD.
Buehler Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Deepest thanks, Kim.
Sharma  Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:07 PM
Oh my, you became a planetary climatologist this time!!! That's so incredibly intriguing, dear Evelyn.. I'm as always, in awe of your artistic wordsmithery, so poetically you've knitted a tapestry of colours and nature, whilst conveying the changing essence of climate, absolutely beautiful. "Under fleecy, lemony clouds, fast moving, and orange sun, grown intense", "house of emerald echoes" Love that! "Pink birds were living high, and red butterflies" You've a heart of an artist, it's evident in
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Dear Hiya, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this tale. Your remarks are high praise indeed, coming from one as talented as yourself. Deepest thanks for your elating compliments and warm congratulations.
Sharma  Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:08 PM
your colourful and enchanting poems! This was such a treat to read and that ending was absolutely impeccably. Heartiest congratulations to you on receiving the gorgeous honour of POTD, loved reading this.. :)
Nicole Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:10 PM
Evelyn, the images you paint are so beautiful. Nature is very inspiring, with that being said, you're always able to create a breathtaking masterpiece with your words. I'm in complete awe, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:15 PM
Your gracious words touch my heart, dear Brandy. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. :) Hugs <3
Poet Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, honor, Evelyn. Great imagery and use of alliteration in this well crafted poem.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:04 PM
Your thoughtful words of congratulations are deeply appreciated, Sotto. :)
Mcconnell Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Evelyn. A lovely piece indeed.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:16 PM
I offer my warmest thanks, Gordon.
May Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 12:01 PM
Congrats on POTD Evelyn, Very nicely written
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Deepest thanks, Joseph. :)
Greenhough Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. It was a lovely story of the beauty and whims of nature. Your poem deserves this great honor.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Your remarks are deeply appreciated, Hilda. Blessings.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 10:20 AM
Enjoyed reading your awesome poem Evelyn, I’ve yet to see the face of thunder, in the sky that is. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day. Beryl
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Deepest thanks for the joy of your comment, Beryl.
Baker Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your lovely POTD, Evelyn! Your imagery and alliteration were both breathtaking, my friend. You are so creative and your imagination is engaging. Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Thank you very much for the pleasure of your warm remarks and compliments, my friend. Happy Sunday! :)
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 7:43 AM
Beautiful imagery and use of alliteration Evelyn. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:58 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Linda. Best of wishes.
Bowring Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Dear Evelyn, many congratulations with POTD with this magnificent write. It’s so captivating with wondrous imagery. Loved every line - perfect flow and rhyme. Fleecy, lemony clouds’ ‘ frosty stars flickered’ ‘ strawberry clouds’ - gorgeous! Loved the way you described the storm and then racing home. Brilliant read. Enjoy your celebratory day sweet friend. You deserve it. Hugs xx
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:55 PM
Thank you so much for your heartwarming appreciation and congratulations, Christina. Hugs <3
Goldsmith Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD  win. I loved reading your wonderful/colorful write. Have a blessed day with your win..................
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:51 PM
It is so nice to read your kind words and well wishes, Paula. Thank you so much.
Kaufman Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Dear Evelyn, This poem is full of alliteration and imagery. It highlights your word skills and craftmanship. It is soo captivating. Congratulations on the POTD.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Your kind words fill me with delight, dear Nancy. Thank you so much. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Dear Evelyn. Enjoyed the beautiful lyrical couplets, and captivating imagery.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:47 PM
I am happy to know you enjoyed the tale, dear friend. Deepest, heartfelt thanks.
Pandit Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Evelyn. Enjoy your special day today.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:44 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks more than I can say. :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 4:19 AM
Evelyn, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery, congratulations on POTD,
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Heartfelt thanks for the joy of your comment, Tania. :)
M  Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 4:08 AM
Congratulations on POTD Evelyn for a beautifully captivating tale! Debx
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Your warm congratulatios are deeply appreciated. Happy Sunday!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:26 AM
There is none happier than me to see you being commented on. Your diction is marvellous. Great imagery too. Congratulations on your POTD. Thoroughly deserved.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:38 PM
I am very gratified by your continued support and appreciation. It is a great joy. Thank you for the lovely compliments. Blessings.
Jones Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:25 AM
Back to say congratulations on your potd!
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Many thanks, Karen. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:29 AM
- Much beauty to see in your lines, Evelyn ... " chameleon sun ... Strawberry clouds ... frosty stars flickered ..... " - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... excellent choice :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:30 PM
Deepest thanks for your kind words of appreciation and congratulations, Anne-Lise. Blessings.
Meadows Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:05 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:26 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette.
Cunningham Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 12:47 AM
Your storytelling skills on fine display Evelyn, I love long poems. Congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Thank you for your lovely words of congratulations, Tom. Best wishes.
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:22 PM
Reading between the lines of your poem, Evelyn, I take it you might desire a position where you wouldn't 'bump into thunder.' If so, have I got a position for you! Call me at your convenience: 1-800-Recruit. ~ FFPtF = From Frying Pan to Fire
Buehler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Well Gershon, I can tell you, it was a hair raising experience (not to mention getting drenched in the rain)! I've never heard of your firm, though. FFPtF, you say? I will definitely be calling! :0
One Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Your captivating poem is a vivid exploration of the intertwined beauty of nature and human existence. Through rich imagery and lyrical language, the poet paints a tapestry of colours and sensations, evoking the fragrant blooms of a garden and the shifting moods of the sky.
Buehler Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for your lovely remarks, which are ever uplifting, Silent One. Blessings.
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