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I was a planetary climatologist, who studied climate variability and change, Like sweet variability of stunning, green tulips, in lavish garden rearranged. Studying the said effects on the biosphere, absorbed so many daily hours, Like industrious days of fragrant, amber honey, after tumbling into flowers. My labors impacted energy usage, along with food production and health, And the survival of endangered species, like golden rays of natural wealth. Faddish flowers fascinated friends, who flattered them, at my broad fence, Under fleecy, lemony clouds, fast moving, and orange sun, grown intense. Famished, feasible family feasted, in lavish flowering fragrance of Fridays, When fugitive, frosty stars flickered, winking at green garden bonsai trees. I lived in the house of emerald echoes, in vivid memory of nature's sound, From birdsong to crickets to evening wind, and brook of babbling renown. Sachets swept away a sudden sadness, as robins sought another summer, On my street of starry-eyed forget me nots, like a tune with no drummer. Nobody knew latest neighborhood news, like my nearest friends next door, Like chameleon sun, crisscrossing teal sky, wholly ignorant of 'nevermore.' Pink birds were living high, and red butterflies viewed a world, ultraviolet; And yellow bees went about their sweet labors, since queen bee desired it. Strawberry clouds sailed around the world, for clouds ever love adventure, As dogwoods barked in summer's dog days, during a gold noon surrender. As I was walking home one day, the sun vanished as skies turned ominous. There was a lightning flash just before the thunder, loud and cacophonous! Suddenly, I saw a male face in the clouds, that was bellowing and enraged, Like blizzard winds through naked trees, howling at a lush year that's aged. Taken aback, like butterflies in gusts, I had come face to face with thunder- The mighty, furious face of the storm, and I was filled with sudden wonder! Then came the silver rains, sideways slanting, at the dead end of drought; And I raced home like all uneasy nature, in the successive hours of doubt. Scintillating sun had returned next day, after banishing the tangerine mist, As benevolent nature was no more angry, its tale ending in an orange twist!

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Date: 2/6/2024 10:15:00 PM
a great poem, in communion with nature, always enjoy your poetry, thanks Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2024 12:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Yann. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 9:36:00 PM
Wonderful write, Evelyn, congratulations on POTD.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/5/2024 12:46:00 PM
Deepest thanks, Kim.
Date: 2/4/2024 9:07:00 PM
Oh my, you became a planetary climatologist this time!!! That's so incredibly intriguing, dear Evelyn.. I'm as always, in awe of your artistic wordsmithery, so poetically you've knitted a tapestry of colours and nature, whilst conveying the changing essence of climate, absolutely beautiful. "Under fleecy, lemony clouds, fast moving, and orange sun, grown intense", "house of emerald echoes" Love that! "Pink birds were living high, and red butterflies" You've a heart of an artist, it's evident in
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 9:22:00 PM
Dear Hiya, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this tale. Your remarks are high praise indeed, coming from one as talented as yourself. Deepest thanks for your elating compliments and warm congratulations.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 2/4/2024 9:08:00 PM
your colourful and enchanting poems! This was such a treat to read and that ending was absolutely impeccably. Heartiest congratulations to you on receiving the gorgeous honour of POTD, loved reading this.. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 6:10:00 PM
Evelyn, the images you paint are so beautiful. Nature is very inspiring, with that being said, you're always able to create a breathtaking masterpiece with your words. I'm in complete awe, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 9:15:00 PM
Your gracious words touch my heart, dear Brandy. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. :) Hugs <3
Date: 2/4/2024 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, honor, Evelyn. Great imagery and use of alliteration in this well crafted poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 9:04:00 PM
Your thoughtful words of congratulations are deeply appreciated, Sotto. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Evelyn. A lovely piece indeed.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 2:16:00 PM
I offer my warmest thanks, Gordon.
Date: 2/4/2024 12:01:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Evelyn, Very nicely written
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 2:12:00 PM
Deepest thanks, Joseph. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. It was a lovely story of the beauty and whims of nature. Your poem deserves this great honor.
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Date: 2/4/2024 2:12:00 PM
Your remarks are deeply appreciated, Hilda. Blessings.
Date: 2/4/2024 10:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your awesome poem Evelyn, I’ve yet to see the face of thunder, in the sky that is. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day. Beryl
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 2:10:00 PM
Deepest thanks for the joy of your comment, Beryl.
Date: 2/4/2024 9:40:00 AM
Such a good, poetic storyteller. Today a climatologist, tomorrow a nurse, next week a mortician. Keep 'em coming Evelyn. Great Potd choice
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 2:08:00 PM
I enjoy writing these stories so much that I don't don't forsee stopping, Tom. Thank you for your lovely remarks. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely POTD, Evelyn! Your imagery and alliteration were both breathtaking, my friend. You are so creative and your imagination is engaging. Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 2:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for the pleasure of your warm remarks and compliments, my friend. Happy Sunday! :)
Date: 2/4/2024 7:43:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and use of alliteration Evelyn. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:58:00 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts very much, Linda. Best of wishes.
Date: 2/4/2024 6:41:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, many congratulations with POTD with this magnificent write. It’s so captivating with wondrous imagery. Loved every line - perfect flow and rhyme. Fleecy, lemony clouds’ ‘ frosty stars flickered’ ‘ strawberry clouds’ - gorgeous! Loved the way you described the storm and then racing home. Brilliant read. Enjoy your celebratory day sweet friend. You deserve it. Hugs xx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartwarming appreciation and congratulations, Christina. Hugs <3
Date: 2/4/2024 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD  win. I loved reading your wonderful/colorful write. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:51:00 PM
It is so nice to read your kind words and well wishes, Paula. Thank you so much.
Date: 2/4/2024 6:21:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, This poem is full of alliteration and imagery. It highlights your word skills and craftmanship. It is soo captivating. Congratulations on the POTD.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:49:00 PM
Your kind words fill me with delight, dear Nancy. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Dear Evelyn. Enjoyed the beautiful lyrical couplets, and captivating imagery.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:47:00 PM
I am happy to know you enjoyed the tale, dear friend. Deepest, heartfelt thanks.
Date: 2/4/2024 4:35:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Evelyn. Enjoy your special day today.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:44:00 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks more than I can say. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 4:19:00 AM
Evelyn, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery, congratulations on POTD,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:42:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks for the joy of your comment, Tania. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 4:08:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Evelyn for a beautifully captivating tale! Debx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:40:00 PM
Your warm congratulatios are deeply appreciated. Happy Sunday!
Date: 2/4/2024 3:26:00 AM
There is none happier than me to see you being commented on. Your diction is marvellous. Great imagery too. Congratulations on your POTD. Thoroughly deserved.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:38:00 PM
I am very gratified by your continued support and appreciation. It is a great joy. Thank you for the lovely compliments. Blessings.
Date: 2/4/2024 3:25:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your potd!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:33:00 PM
Many thanks, Karen. :)
Date: 2/4/2024 2:47:00 AM
beautiful lines, flowing words, and vivid imagery! I enjoyed the read & congrats on your POTD designation!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:32:00 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks so much. My very best wishes.
Date: 2/4/2024 2:29:00 AM
- Much beauty to see in your lines, Evelyn ... " chameleon sun ... Strawberry clouds ... frosty stars flickered ..... " - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... excellent choice :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:30:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your kind words of appreciation and congratulations, Anne-Lise. Blessings.
Date: 2/4/2024 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette.
Date: 2/4/2024 12:47:00 AM
Your storytelling skills on fine display Evelyn, I love long poems. Congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2024 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely words of congratulations, Tom. Best wishes.
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