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A Dying Flame

It's been so long since My Flame of LOVE has been extinguished Yet my Heart screams for it new a LOVE that was so distinguished People who knew of this LOVE: said a true LOVE is Everlasting On that dark desolate day my LOVE went away; my heart starting Fasting I thought I would never LOVE again, but then a Family of POETS Entered With all the LOVELY POETIC Masterpieces : The POET'S with their LOVE Centered The History of Poetic LOVE concieved in every form, every shape, every name From all over the world : the joy and sadness, the LOVE Tributes of LOVES' flame No matter what country : no matter what race, the song of LOVE is Always the SAME

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/23/2012 4:12:00 PM

This is very sweet of you to write. You are a spectacular person and poet. Always, Laura

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/25/2010 2:42:00 PM

This is Beautifully, Harry. to have a friend that keeps your heart beating, again. even for a little. you write of it well here, and full of love. much love to you, my spirit brother. -Always&Forever your sister spirit, Lynn

Angela Alldredge

Date: 2/18/2010 5:54:00 PM

I'm sorry you lost your love. On the other had I'm glad you found peace with the family of Poet's. I find it peaceful when when I pour my feelings into my own poems.

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 12/14/2009 8:49:00 PM

AWWW this is so sweet and so true. And thank you so much for commenting on my poem. i appreciate it...Aleera

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/8/2009 5:38:00 AM

This is so true, HG. Poets loving poets through words of kindness, encouragement, friendship, and faith. Praying for your new love to be everlasting as well. Poetry. God's gift of words to the heart. Keep writing!Lovingly, Dane Ann (soup mail)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/6/2009 5:17:00 PM

Hello HG Goodd to see you writing again! Another wonderful feeling write here. God bless. Robert

Marty Owens

Date: 12/1/2009 7:23:00 PM

Wonderful poem...enjoyed tonight...Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/30/2009 6:04:00 PM

beautiful, poem!! thanks for the encouragement.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 5:31:00 PM

Great tribute to soup. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/30/2009 11:36:00 AM

This seems to have touched quite a few soupers. Including me...well done HG..i cant stand the thought of your heart "fasting"..BG

Simone Segal

Date: 11/30/2009 2:29:00 AM

Very heart felt, I know it won't be long before you find love again with your beautiful poetic heart, thank you for your lovely comment, love Simone

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/29/2009 12:12:00 PM

Very good.Read my poem Today is the Day.It will lift your spirits.

Danielle White

Date: 11/29/2009 2:15:00 AM

Well said, lovely, but "conceived" is misspelled. (Sorry, can't help myself.) ***Danielle***

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 10:05:00 PM

Extremely beautiful and heartfelt from a beautiful individual .. U .. HG ... I am proud to call u my BEAU... your words are so touching and love exudes from this masterpiece of emotion.. the Soup is truly a resting place for each poet for a different reason.. and u are so very kind to compliment me as u do... u will spoil me more than I already am.. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2009 9:13:00 PM

So beautiful,love is love..the voice of love is so loud it tremors the earth of our heart cores.. yes no matter what color,which country,cultures,religion,lov e is love and is so beautiful,as so are your words--Charma