A Dying Art

In an American primitive painting
she fetches a pail from a well;
the bucket on her hip is full of
broken eagles,
wind turbines churn in the distance.

Corn fields are bundled together.
Drones hum like doves in the evening.
The art of moon-spinning
is practiced on front porches.
People make do with
transitory Amazon wants.

Most get caught by the faceless winds,
those rattling sighs that spread
the dry seeds
of unwanted crops.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ermine Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 7:40 PM
A splinter in perception! Terrific impact with limited outlay. Demented vision translates to me. Maybe I'm way off, I liked what it said to me about fickle folk, old school mentality.
Ashford Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Thank you Sigrid, I think you rightly 'gronked' it as Robert Heinlein would say. Obliged for your insightful comment. e
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