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A Dying Art

In an American primitive painting she fetches a pail from a well; the bucket on her hip is full of broken eagles, wind turbines churn in the distance. Corn fields are bundled together. Drones hum like doves in the evening. The art of moon-spinning is practiced on front porches. People make do with transitory Amazon wants. Most get caught by the faceless winds, those rattling sighs that spread the dry seeds of unwanted crops.

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Date: 8/9/2020 7:40:00 PM
A splinter in perception! Terrific impact with limited outlay. Demented vision translates to me. Maybe I'm way off, I liked what it said to me about fickle folk, old school mentality.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/9/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Sigrid, I think you rightly 'gronked' it as Robert Heinlein would say. Obliged for your insightful comment. e

Book: Shattered Sighs