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A Duel

sweet flowing hands sweeping charm dancing slowly like wings of a butterfly His eyes - gentle, perceiving, acknowledging In the midst of silence, he's aware of her every move sliding along shuffles feet as arms go back taking snake shape the great cobra strikes His lips - challenged, firm yet slightly amused In the midst of chaos, he's alert of her every attack clashing sounds defending one heart each strike finding equal bows the head in honor of grace His hands - deadly, lethal yet softened towards her In the midst of the duel, he shares a moment with her claws attack sweeping movements floating on air gliding souls within a heartbeat smiling defeat His heart - beats in admiration, slightly fascinated In the end, as he smiles in defeat...a heart is silently stolen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/6/2016 1:53:00 AM
Beautiful collaborations. You didn't write this alone dear ;)
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:41:00 AM
Liam, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2013 4:19:00 PM
Very dashing and intense! Sometimes, love can seem like a battle, now and then! I loved this poem, Liam! Excellent work, my friend! :)
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Date: 11/13/2013 3:56:00 PM
Intriguing..A lot of suspense and mystery. .Mskes one ponder very deep.
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Date: 11/13/2013 1:05:00 PM
WOW! I LOVED how you play these two against each other. Superb write, Liam...Very enthralling and alluring.
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