A Duel

sweet flowing hands
sweeping charm
dancing slowly
like wings
of a butterfly

His eyes - gentle, perceiving, acknowledging
In the midst of silence, he's aware of her every move

sliding along 
shuffles feet
as arms 
go back
taking snake shape
the great cobra strikes

His lips - challenged, firm yet slightly amused
In the midst of chaos, he's alert of her every attack

clashing sounds
defending one heart
each strike
finding equal
bows the head
in honor 
of grace

His hands - deadly, lethal yet softened towards her
In the midst of the duel, he shares a moment with her

claws attack
sweeping movements
floating on air
gliding souls
within a heartbeat
smiling defeat

His heart - beats in admiration, slightly fascinated
In the end, as he smiles in defeat...a heart is silently stolen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haikutwinkle Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 1:53 AM
Beautiful collaborations. You didn't write this alone dear ;)
A   Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Liam, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
Deschler Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 4:19 PM
Very dashing and intense! Sometimes, love can seem like a battle, now and then! I loved this poem, Liam! Excellent work, my friend! :)
Chircop Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Intriguing..A lot of suspense and mystery. .Mskes one ponder very deep.
Manassian Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 1:05 PM
WOW! I LOVED how you play these two against each other. Superb write, Liam...Very enthralling and alluring.
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