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A drunken spirit's song

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five unrhymed couplets ten lines perfect in the eyes of love playing the same tunes over and back in the moons glare we all can see the warmness of the light of grace

When I tenderly looked upon you 
the moonlight beamed back gracious

One within a thousand faces captured 
soul felt silver threaded thoughts sparked

Wrapped up inside a treasured kiss
held on soft velvet lips precious jewel

The breath leaves as it floats away melting 
into your sunlight through space filled cracks

I keep holding on to forever and always 
warmly breathing the same air as thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/15/2016 5:22:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Liam. I loved "into your sunlight through space filled cracks." You capture images so well with your pen.
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:11:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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