A Drumbeat Gentle Sweeps

Hi, Joe.Thanks for paying me a visit today!!

petrols dry car wont fire, me brain is running empty, shut up brain you rattle ire, of words there sure are plenty...

great write,,,,, as time goes marching on ;}

A drumbeat subtle sweeps, as the cleaner sweeps the street, And the saddle leather squeaks, cos he's riding ol Darkie, in his mind with the herd. Thank's Big Joe i'ts the horses you know:) on ya mate Don

Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Joe. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Oh you, Joe Maverick, the master of intrigue! Two riddles I have tried figuring out...now I read this and athough I've some idea, I know I'll probably get it wrong. Makes me feel stupid (are you happy?:). Actually I was watching TV, until Mr Inquisitive said I should check my email....meaning he wanted my seat. Hope you're having a relaxing evening..wishing you the best! Mikki

Sadly some folk don't handle a lot too good and end up worse than nil, owing. But for those who manage it, good luck to them. Goodonya Joe. Merv

a great write, enjoyed reading it. and thank you for reading the cellar door and for your comment.

so true, making up a story is the best gossip though. lol

Joe hope all worked out well for u with the photos on my blog for the contest luv.. good luck my friend.. and hope u enjoyed them...

Precision with a little snare, lil base, lil toms....KQQL .......thanks

Hi Joe. Well written thought provoking piece. Eamon

It's done, Joe, and I sent you a new Soup mail. Hope you have received the entry. Love, Carolyn

thankxx Joe for your encouraging words luv.. getting my feet wet with the Diamante form which I so luv..

Joe, I'm sending you a new Soup mail in a moment.

such depth, joe... if for a contest, winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

like this Joe, love the alliteration, and the message it conveys. Harry

and how have you been lately??

Hi, Joe, was this for the alliteration contest a while back. It seems like a sijo or something!!

Thoughts and lines to ponder Joe... luv poetry that makes the reader delve deeper luv..

Interesting thoughts penned..Thanks for stopping by your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Joe, it's the people who've had "nil" that are most grateful when good things come their way. Quite a thought-provoking couplet! Love, Carolyn

Lovely thoughts on going from nil to a lot, with rhyme and alliteration , Joe