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A Drumbeat Gentle Sweeps

Swish swanky subtle, perception intended (not) happens so that some folk go on nil, to arrive at a lot!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 12:52:00 AM

Hi, Joe.Thanks for paying me a visit today!!

Don Johnson

Date: 9/20/2012 3:26:00 PM

petrols dry car wont fire, me brain is running empty, shut up brain you rattle ire, of words there sure are plenty...

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:12:00 PM

Good to read your honest Reply mate.'

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/15/2012 3:17:00 PM

great write,,,,, as time goes marching on ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 6/6/2011 3:50:00 PM

A drumbeat subtle sweeps, as the cleaner sweeps the street, And the saddle leather squeaks, cos he's riding ol Darkie, in his mind with the herd. Thank's Big Joe i'ts the horses you know:) on ya mate Don

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:14:00 PM

Alright mate.'

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 5:18:00 AM

Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much Joe. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:14:00 PM

Hey Carol thanks indeed all My best.'

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/19/2011 6:43:00 PM

Oh you, Joe Maverick, the master of intrigue! Two riddles I have tried figuring out...now I read this and athough I've some idea, I know I'll probably get it wrong. Makes me feel stupid (are you happy?:). Actually I was watching TV, until Mr Inquisitive said I should check my email....meaning he wanted my seat. Hope you're having a relaxing evening..wishing you the best! Mikki

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:15:00 PM

God bless you, thanks for this One.'

Merv Webster

Date: 4/8/2011 4:26:00 PM

Sadly some folk don't handle a lot too good and end up worse than nil, owing. But for those who manage it, good luck to them. Goodonya Joe. Merv

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:11:00 PM

Hello Merv, thanks for the input Mate '

James Foulk

Date: 4/3/2011 7:55:00 PM

a great write, enjoyed reading it. and thank you for reading the cellar door and for your comment.

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:16:00 PM

Hyh Janes good to see you here.'

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 6:02:00 AM

so true, making up a story is the best gossip though. lol

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/4/2022 3:17:00 PM

I guess that's so for a whole Lotta people Doris.'

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2011 9:53:00 PM

Joe hope all worked out well for u with the photos on my blog for the contest luv.. good luck my friend.. and hope u enjoyed them...

Judy Konos

Date: 3/29/2011 7:13:00 AM

Precision with a little snare, lil base, lil toms....KQQL .......thanks

Eamon Duffin

Date: 3/26/2011 9:26:00 AM

Hi Joe. Well written thought provoking piece. Eamon

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2011 9:18:00 AM

It's done, Joe, and I sent you a new Soup mail. Hope you have received the entry. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 7:38:00 PM

thankxx Joe for your encouraging words luv.. getting my feet wet with the Diamante form which I so luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 4:20:00 PM

Joe, I'm sending you a new Soup mail in a moment.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/22/2011 11:18:00 AM

such depth, joe... if for a contest, winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Rick Parise

Date: 3/22/2011 10:42:00 AM

soupmail

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/22/2011 12:52:00 AM

like this Joe, love the alliteration, and the message it conveys. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2011 11:18:00 PM

Hi, Joe, was this for the alliteration contest a while back. It seems like a sijo or something!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2011 11:18:00 PM

and how have you been lately??

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/20/2011 7:36:00 PM

Thoughts and lines to ponder Joe... luv poetry that makes the reader delve deeper luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2011 1:00:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned..Thanks for stopping by your kind review of my work was uplifting..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2011 11:20:00 AM

Joe, it's the people who've had "nil" that are most grateful when good things come their way. Quite a thought-provoking couplet! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 4:53:00 PM

Lovely thoughts on going from nil to a lot, with rhyme and alliteration , Joe