A Drop of Spring

Winter afternoon walk Acorns adorn the still path Rain drops on pink buds

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Arany P.

Date: 3/5/2009 8:45:00 AM

well written about the season we await... loved the images you have painted with this write... ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/19/2009 10:50:00 PM

Nice images BG, and I yearn for a drop of Spring...Raul

John Rhinem

Date: 2/19/2009 7:01:00 PM

Sounds like a very peaceful and pleasant walk my dear friend! Hello Barbara Gorelick~I sincerely hope that life has been treating you well dear lady!!? I really enjoyed this lovely write of yours here~very wonderful reflection indeed!!! Warmth & Blessings Always To You & Your Loves, John!":)

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2009 5:37:00 PM

It sounds like a walk I took today. The acorns from this past winter, a bit of pink telling of spring on the horizon. Lovely ~ Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/19/2009 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful my friend. I love the image of the piece. Great write.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/19/2009 3:22:00 PM

Beautifully written haiku, great imagination.. Warm and fresh. I cannot wait for that glimpse of spring, Nicely done..God Bless*Tyesha

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/19/2009 2:59:00 PM

My kids used to love to crunch the acorns, great fun. Im ready for some pink! Laurie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2009 2:58:00 PM

Barbara, just today I was looking at those raindrops on azaleas that are beginning to bloom here. Thanks for letting me walk with you in this lovely poem, Carolyn

Date: 2/19/2009 2:44:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. I can't wait for that "Drop of Spring." Keep on writing! Karen