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A Drop of Sorrow

"a dagger of pain, a tear of grief" ~ Constance La France "A dagger of pain, a tear of grief" I stagger again in sheer disbelief A lifetime of ache, a twinge of hurt A prime heartbreak, I cringe in discomfort A sting of distress, a twist in fate I sing to suppress dismissed hope's dictate A lament of woe, a prick of stress This torment slow, a trick of love's caress A drop of sorrow, a pang of throes It'll stop tomorrow, this clang of shadows 16th May 2023 For Constance La France's "Writing challenge - A quotes" contest

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Date: 5/25/2023 8:00:00 PM
Wow, this truly is powerful, and beautiful Joanna <3
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Date: 5/21/2023 11:19:00 PM
A very powerful work, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/21/2023 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Joanna.
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Date: 5/21/2023 12:24:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I love your quote image too !
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Date: 5/17/2023 11:50:00 PM
EXCELLENT Sure to win Top Blessings
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Date: 5/16/2023 9:11:00 AM
Very emotive, touchingly poignant and beautifully rhyming ! Impressive composition, dear Joanna !
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Date: 5/16/2023 4:26:00 AM
Your rhyming couplets are wonderfully expressive, Jo. As a dagger leads to drops of blood, so does it cause teardrops to fall. Which is the most painful? The emotional one.
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Date: 5/16/2023 2:16:00 AM
Love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/16/2023 2:05:00 AM
A clang of shadows, a drop of sorrow, a pang of throes. I like this one, Joanna. Thank you.
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Date: 5/16/2023 1:12:00 AM
Sad but so well rhymed.
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