A Dreamworld Chimera

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And for my sweet meditation-  I am listening to Vilvaldi,
the four seasons concerto, wild and quite dreamy;
and I am soon lost in a daydream of flowing creeks,
     singing birds, whimsy and fantasy illusion.
     A mosaic, a tapestry, a fresco,
     and I am walking this entangled maze; 
     a labyrinth of green lush vinery,
                                the moon my illumination.
        A spirit guardian leads,
           me to a garden;
a place of posy, wild flowers, a paradise, a dreamland,
and a little cherub angel child welcomes me to rest.
It is like Heaven here in this Shangri-La land,
                                yet my innermost heart weeps;
        midnight ink black tears,
           for I know this child.
Oh, horrible the memories that wrap me in darkness now,
it is my sister love, lost to death in the web of time;
clouds gather dark, hazy and misty and Vilvaldi plays,
                                 his rhythmic, harmonious violin.

February 6, 2017

Narrative/A Dreamworld Chimera
Copyright Protected, ID 873004

Written for the contest, Chimera World
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron

Third Place 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 2/20/2017 8:01:00 AM
A wonderful write BW. Very expressive with phrases like-"midnight ink black tears,"
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Date: 2/19/2017 10:56:00 AM
Gorgeous one!!! I loved it - congrats on your placement
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Date: 2/19/2017 8:57:00 AM
Every time I think I have a hint of talent and then I read something like this, simply Astounding, Congratulations! Back to the drawing board for me :)
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest. A beautiful poem about one of the most exquisite concerto of Vivaldi.
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful! I love Vivaldi, too. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:08:00 PM
Such a vivid mood you cast BW, congratulations...
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Date: 2/7/2017 2:34:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, BW! A stunning piece of poetry!
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Date: 2/6/2017 11:04:00 PM
I wonder if you can play the piano. You play on emotions, so very well executed, from piano to crescendo down to sad melody. Beautiful.
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Date: 2/6/2017 10:39:00 PM
Expressively and elegantly beautiful Wings...and Vilvaldi too ...we have a winner!...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/6/2017 6:45:00 PM
This poetry causes me to be struck by its beauty and cry at the same time.
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Date: 2/6/2017 6:35:00 PM
A joy to read :)
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Date: 2/6/2017 5:36:00 PM
Wow, wow, I am virtually speechless. I'm not sure I could say anything that would do justice to this fantastic piece of writing. I guess I could say good luck, but you won't need it.
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