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A Dreamworld Chimera


And for my sweet meditation-  I am listening to Vilvaldi,
the four seasons concerto, wild and quite dreamy;
and I am soon lost in a daydream of flowing creeks,
     singing birds, whimsy and fantasy illusion.
     A mosaic, a tapestry, a fresco,
     and I am walking this entangled maze; 
     a labyrinth of green lush vinery,
                                the moon my illumination.
        A spirit guardian leads,
           me to a garden;
a place of posy, wild flowers, a paradise, a dreamland,
and a little cherub angel child welcomes me to rest.
It is like Heaven here in this Shangri-La land,
                                yet my innermost heart weeps;
        midnight ink black tears,
           for I know this child.
Oh, horrible the memories that wrap me in darkness now,
it is my sister love, lost to death in the web of time;
clouds gather dark, hazy and misty and Vilvaldi plays,
                                 his rhythmic, harmonious violin.

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February 6, 2017

Poetry/Narrative/A Dreamworld Chimera
Copyright Protected, ID 17- 873-004-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Chimera World
sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron


Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 8:01 AM
A wonderful write BW. Very expressive with phrases like-"midnight ink black tears,"
Polydoro Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Gorgeous one!!! I loved it - congrats on your placement
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Every time I think I have a hint of talent and then I read something like this, simply Astounding, Congratulations! Back to the drawing board for me :)
Negron Flores Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest. A beautiful poem about one of the most exquisite concerto of Vivaldi.
Krampe Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful! I love Vivaldi, too. Congrats on your win.
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Such a vivid mood you cast BW, congratulations...
Wolf Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Absolutely beautiful, BW! A stunning piece of poetry!
Warrior Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Expressively and elegantly beautiful Wings...and Vilvaldi too ...we have a winner!...god bless...^WW^
Wanter Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 6:45 PM
This poetry causes me to be struck by its beauty and cry at the same time.
Smith Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 6:35 PM
A joy to read :)
Green Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 5:36 PM
Wow, wow, I am virtually speechless. I'm not sure I could say anything that would do justice to this fantastic piece of writing. I guess I could say good luck, but you won't need it.
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