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A Dream Scene

Within my mind walls, upon a screen, amazing adventures can be seen. Through the fog that slowly drifts, a lovely swan, her wings she lifts. Head held high shows she is pleased by evening light’s embracing breeze. Into the water, she then glides, upon liquid silver, she then rides. In amber browns, trees whisper songs, as she swims near one furlong. As evening shadows enjoy light-play, oh how I wish, that I could stay.

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Date: 2/4/2020 4:50:00 PM
Hello M. L. … peaceful thoughts lead to peaceful sleep. Nice poem indeed M. L. - Lindsay
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2020 11:43:00 AM
Yes indeed, thank you.
Date: 2/3/2020 12:31:00 AM
And the psychologists all agree that 67% of dreams are dark. Yours must be in the other 33%! Beautifully penned, my friend! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2020 11:44:00 AM
As long as I've been interpreting my own dreams, I have overcome the dark ones. Thanks Victor.
Date: 2/2/2020 6:05:00 PM
This is beautiful. Nice rhythm and flow to ... Lovely penning M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/5/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra.

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