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A Dream In the Woods

As we walk in the woods we talk he spoke his gental words as we alk we talked as we reached the end of the woods we sit by the fire as we watched the flames I turned and looked in his eyes and saw it i saw what i wanted It wasn't him it wasn't anything around it was someone to love someone to really know me Someone to care about my existence The person i longed for

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/29/2009 5:35:00 PM
Touching poem! There a few errors in spelling - "gentle" and as "we walked". I particularly like the line - "Someone to card bout my existence". Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/29/2009 4:19:00 AM
this was very nice because it there was alot of feelings in it
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:54:00 PM
true feeling. been here.
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:03:00 PM
wow... some lovely of expressing your love. enjoyed poetry and have a great day.
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