A Dream Comes Floating

^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ We are at the junction of the Little River and the Ottawa River, journeying into the Canadian wilderness by canoe, the paddles stroke slowly into the water, paddles heavily incised with vines and flowers, and I am dipping my hair into the deep blue. Spirit, is a native man in a crisp white shirt, his head shaved but for one braid with feathers, his blue leggings enthrall me, intricate beaded moccasins are sublime, his leather pouch and glass jewelry lovely, I think I love him . . . Falcon, a beautiful man with raven hair falling down his back, his feathers are fluttering in the wind, he has dangling earrings, a red cape edged with gold threads, his beads are exquisite, and he is telling me stories and smiling at me . . . I could love him, and I am dipping my hair into the deep blue. O, how can this Ojibwa girl choose, I love them both . . . I truly do, but luckily for me this is a dream and I can love both. ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ _____________________ December 10, 2012 Poetry/Narrative/A Dream Comes Floating Copyright Protected, ID 12-441-915-10 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France
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Ongawo Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:58 AM
dream dream dream, i wouldn't want to wake up especially from a dream as such, amazing narrative, Constance -Lucas-
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:39 PM
wow, what a dreamy dream this was! VEry interesting how you told the story and how you described two beautiful native american men. I think you would make a beautiful Ojigwa girl for them!
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Beautiful poem. (miigwech) thank you.
Sivey Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:36 PM
This is a very beautiful and awe inspiring write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful and pleasant poem this afternoon! This is a peaceful and wondrous piece, Great Work!!
Falotico Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:33 PM
You write with images so well.. hugs from Santa Michael
Lander Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:18 PM
I also love this so...a bit mysterious but it keep me reading to the end...
Horne Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 1:33 PM
love this beautiful and imaginative write, my friend. Hope you are having a great day x
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