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A Dream

A Dream
I patiently waited for you all the day long, my beloved. Even the tired, orange, afternoon sun long ago drifted off to sleep. Nighttime arrived in a hurry shoving away the short-lived evening, with rhinestone stars dotting a shimmering, dark, velvet sky, and a pale, silver moon shyly venturing on the horizon.
After the lamps were all lit, I struggled to stay awake, but my heavy eyelids drooped as I was weary from the long day. So forgive me, my lord, as I unwittingly succumbed to the potent spell of the Sandman’s magical dust; and sly Morpheus sneakily captured me in his soothing embrace.
Come share with me this dream of tranquil enchantment, in a watercolor field of delicately perfumed lavender and clover. And I in peaceful repose await your arrival, my lord, to gently awaken me with tender kisses, sweet as nectar. I look for you, my dearest love, in a dream!
05-25-2014 Contest: A Dream Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placement: 3rd

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Date: 6/15/2015 2:27:00 AM
I love your work! I love this poem.
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Date: 6/15/2015 6:13:00 AM
Gavin, your compliments warm my heart! I am so happy you enjoyed this piece which is one of my all-time favorites! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Date: 8/29/2014 10:34:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful piece! This is such a lovely write - so wonderfully romantic! Kika
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Date: 9/20/2014 2:13:00 PM
Hi Kika, you honor me with your wonderful compliments. Thank you for the support and encouragement which means a lot to me! Kindest regards.
Date: 6/23/2014 6:44:00 PM
Wow this one is even better than the last two it's like you built upn to this great write. I even skipped around on your poems to titles that appealed to me. I so loved the imagery in this poem I felt as though you took me on your DREAM JOURNEY, I could see you waiting for your beloved. Bravo on the imagination for this poem and included this reader on your passport of inspiration. Very well done again lady have a great day and after reading this thanks for making my so inspirational. cheri
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/23/2014 7:32:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend, for your wonderful, encouraging compliments as usual! As I have stated before, I am learning from the magnificent poets such as yourself! Thank you for your continued support!
Date: 6/10/2014 4:00:00 PM
While its true that poetry should multiply interpretations, this piece goes over and beyond. My imagination is gone wild. Very clever and imaginative. Thanks
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/10/2014 8:14:00 PM
Hi Kenneth, you honor me with your wonderful compliments. Thank you for the support and encouragement which means a lot to me! Kindest regards.
Date: 6/7/2014 11:47:00 PM
I can identify with this poem - well expressed. I have also had such an experience. Please read http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=572142
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2014 9:52:00 AM
Thanks, Vicki for your comments. It's always good to hear from you. And I always enjoy my visits with you!
Date: 6/5/2014 10:17:00 AM
Thank you sooo very much, my friend! You are always so very complimentary and supportive. Kindest regards.
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:34:00 AM
Truly magical write my friend!!! Such inspiration must dwell deep within a poet's singing heart for the words to spring forth as a beautiful and lovely gift to the world.. BBBBBBravooooo!!!!!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 10:17:00 AM
Thank you sooo very much, my friend! You are always so very complimentary and supportive. Kindest regards!
Date: 5/30/2014 11:50:00 PM
sweet win, Pandita, Love ~SKAT~
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/31/2014 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much, SKAT! I really appreciate your kind comment. Thanks for visiting!
Date: 5/29/2014 6:59:00 PM
any time, Pandita, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:54:00 PM
PANDITA, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/29/2014 6:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda always good to get your good wishes. Thanks.
Date: 5/29/2014 2:49:00 AM
sory for typo errors my key board went wied.
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:46:00 AM
so lovley,i like this dream if i wake from a good dream i try to go back to sleep to see if my dream continus. som dram you just would love to go back to thnks for alyor kind cmmens andsport on mypoem
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/29/2014 11:24:00 AM
Diane, thank you for your kind comments. Like you I try to resume good dreams but they are usually hard to recapture! Don't worry about the typos - it's the sentiments that count! Thanks again.
Date: 5/26/2014 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win Excellent interpretation of the painting. Hugs, SuZ
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/27/2014 6:42:00 AM
SuZ, I really appreciate your kind comment. Thank you!
Date: 5/26/2014 6:28:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Pandita. Congratulations!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/26/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Faye. Your comments mean a lot to me and I appreciate the encouragement!
Date: 5/26/2014 2:34:00 PM
Hi Pandita, A lovely poem you have here. Each verse is beautifully written. My favorite line is the one about the "Sandman's magical dust." Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/26/2014 6:21:00 PM
Carolyn, many thanks for your wonderful comments and support!
Date: 5/26/2014 8:10:00 AM
Very good work, Im happy for your win. Keep writing! BG
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/26/2014 10:37:00 AM
Hi Barbara, many thanks for your kind comments and encouragement!

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