A Dream

A Dream
I patiently waited for you all the day long, my beloved. Even the tired, orange, afternoon sun long ago drifted off to sleep. Nighttime arrived in a hurry shoving away the short-lived evening, with rhinestone stars dotting a shimmering, dark, velvet sky, and a pale, silver moon shyly venturing on the horizon.
After the lamps were all lit, I struggled to stay awake, but my heavy eyelids drooped as I was weary from the long day. So forgive me, my lord, as I unwittingly succumbed to the potent spell of the Sandman’s magical dust; and sly Morpheus sneakily captured me in his soothing embrace.
Come share with me this dream of tranquil enchantment, in a watercolor field of delicately perfumed lavender and clover. And I in peaceful repose await your arrival, my lord, to gently awaken me with tender kisses, sweet as nectar. I look for you, my dearest love, in a dream!
05-25-2014 Contest: A Dream Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Placement: 3rd
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Joachims Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 2:27 AM
I love your work! I love this poem.
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June 15, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Gavin, your compliments warm my heart! I am so happy you enjoyed this piece which is one of my all-time favorites! Have a wonderful day! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:34 PM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful piece! This is such a lovely write - so wonderfully romantic! Kika
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September 20, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Hi Kika, you honor me with your wonderful compliments. Thank you for the support and encouragement which means a lot to me! Kindest regards.
Dunn Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Wow this one is even better than the last two it's like you built upn to this great write. I even skipped around on your poems to titles that appealed to me. I so loved the imagery in this poem I felt as though you took me on your DREAM JOURNEY, I could see you waiting for your beloved. Bravo on the imagination for this poem and included this reader on your passport of inspiration. Very well done again lady have a great day and after reading this thanks for making my so inspirational. cheri
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June 23, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Thank you my dear friend, for your wonderful, encouraging compliments as usual! As I have stated before, I am learning from the magnificent poets such as yourself! Thank you for your continued support!
Alexander Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:00 PM
While its true that poetry should multiply interpretations, this piece goes over and beyond. My imagination is gone wild. Very clever and imaginative. Thanks
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June 10, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Hi Kenneth, you honor me with your wonderful compliments. Thank you for the support and encouragement which means a lot to me! Kindest regards.
Acquah Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 11:47 PM
I can identify with this poem - well expressed. I have also had such an experience. Please read http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=572142
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June 8, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, Vicki for your comments. It's always good to hear from you. And I always enjoy my visits with you!
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June 5, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thank you sooo very much, my friend! You are always so very complimentary and supportive. Kindest regards.
Lindley Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Truly magical write my friend!!! Such inspiration must dwell deep within a poet's singing heart for the words to spring forth as a beautiful and lovely gift to the world.. BBBBBBravooooo!!!!!
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June 5, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thank you sooo very much, my friend! You are always so very complimentary and supportive. Kindest regards!
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May 30, 2014 at 11:50 PM
sweet win, Pandita, Love ~SKAT~
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May 31, 2014 at 1:11 AM
Thank you so very much, SKAT! I really appreciate your kind comment. Thanks for visiting!
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May 29, 2014 at 6:59 PM
any time, Pandita, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda
A   Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 4:54 PM
PANDITA, CONGRATULATIONS, enjoying your winning poem in Isaiah's DREAM paint contest.... hugs...Linda
Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thanks so much, Linda always good to get your good wishes. Thanks.
Christian Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:49 AM
sory for typo errors my key board went wied.
Christian Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 2:46 AM
so lovley,i like this dream if i wake from a good dream i try to go back to sleep to see if my dream continus. som dram you just would love to go back to thnks for alyor kind cmmens andsport on mypoem
Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Diane, thank you for your kind comments. Like you I try to resume good dreams but they are usually hard to recapture! Don't worry about the typos - it's the sentiments that count! Thanks again.
Delaney Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Congratulations on your great win Excellent interpretation of the painting. Hugs, SuZ
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May 27, 2014 at 6:42 AM
SuZ, I really appreciate your kind comment. Thank you!
Gibson Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Beautiful writing, Pandita. Congratulations!
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May 26, 2014 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so very much, Faye. Your comments mean a lot to me and I appreciate the encouragement!
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Hi Pandita, A lovely poem you have here. Each verse is beautifully written. My favorite line is the one about the "Sandman's magical dust." Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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May 26, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Carolyn, many thanks for your wonderful comments and support!
Gorelick Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Very good work, Im happy for your win. Keep writing! BG
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May 26, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Hi Barbara, many thanks for your kind comments and encouragement!
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