Victor Buhagiar Poet Free verse

A Dream

I dreamt I flew upwards
toward the twinkling shining stars.
But who was I?
An exotic insect painted in various hues,
Iridescent wings strong like an eagle.
I flew high. Flew as I could,
Up towards the Milky way,
Back to Saturn jumping from ring to ring
Down to Venus, would I find love?
So I watched the universe revolving,
observe the brilliance of novas
Fell into a deadly black hole
Only to wake up in bed,
With to a silver moonbeam
Shining straight in my eyes.

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Valsa George January 5, 2022 at 12:43 AM A beautiful dream, Victor ! I often have such dreams of flying in the sky like a bird. But you have gone far too high to watch galaxies and super novas.... :) :)

Lisa Ricci October 7, 2021 at 7:46 AM Victor Victor Victor. Thank goodness for dreams because with them we can fly high and higher. This is more than lovely and wonderful expression. Truly. May this day find you well and safe. Blessings always.

Alexis Y. October 6, 2021 at 3:07 AM WoW! Victor, That was some dream. Well done:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel October 5, 2021 at 2:26 AM Lovely dream, Victor:)

Delice Arleen Skelly October 5, 2021 at 2:14 AM What a lovely dreamscape Victor...Delice

Beryl Edmonds October 4, 2021 at 9:21 PM A very interesting dream Victor, if only we had been given wings. Loved the read… Belle

Unseeking Seeker October 4, 2021 at 8:20 PM Brilliant write, Victor!

Bj Legros Kelley October 4, 2021 at 6:34 PM Nice!

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2021 at 2:32 PM I think that would be a really cool dream to have but I don't think I ever imagined myself as an insect or animal, only as someone younger or different looking. NIce imagery

Sara Kendrick October 4, 2021 at 1:41 PM I enjoyed reading this very creative, imaginative and descriptive work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Thanks for dropping by my page, Sara

Kim Rodrigues October 4, 2021 at 12:20 PM I really like this! Love the imagery of jumping on Saturn’s rings! xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 4, 2021 at 10:15 AM What a beautiful dream! And almost as dreamy to awaken to a moonbeam. This poetic gem is a fave. Hugs.

Sotto Poet October 4, 2021 at 9:46 AM Victor, you have wonderfully recounted a fantastic and intriguing dream. Soaking up to dazzling moonbeams is a lovely sensation that has been well described.

Jan Allison October 4, 2021 at 9:44 AM aww i think many of us dream we can fly, a charming poem Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May October 4, 2021 at 8:40 AM Love the ending of this galactic journey Victor, best wishes

Vijay Pandit October 4, 2021 at 5:02 AM A fascinating dream eloquently captured Victor. Nice to wake up to silver moonbeams--beautifully said.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2021 at 4:02 AM - A wonderful dream, Victor :) - Have a lovely autumn week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose October 4, 2021 at 3:30 AM Your fantasy world is both inviting and alluring. I'd never come home if that is how it is up there. I know that feeling of waking up, lol, oi my aching bones, have a beautiful restful day, look up, there is much to see up there, more then down here, Much love xo

Judy Ball October 4, 2021 at 2:21 AM WoW! Cool dream. I never remember mine. Very descriptive and filled with imagery. Good one Victor as always. God Bless, JB

Tom Cunningham October 4, 2021 at 12:56 AM What an amazing dream you had Victor, Tom