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I dread the thought that Man With his thoughtlessness and greed The cancer of our planet has become Thus If other planets he conquers, himself to please Will we be talking about the metastasis of This horrible disease? © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 July 2019

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Date: 7/22/2019 8:08:00 AM
I am afraid that we will most likely be. Great food for thought.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/22/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for gracious visit and comment dearest, M.L.K!
Date: 7/21/2019 11:14:00 PM
Unfortunately when greed clouds ones vision then the beauty of nature takes a back seat. Sadly for most, what one 'cannot see' one doesn't worry about. A great Epigram of thought dearest Demetrios. A fave....Maria xxx
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Date: 7/22/2019 11:33:00 AM
Dearest, Maria you so right. Thank you so much for your support! xxx
Date: 7/21/2019 1:49:00 PM
Hi Demitrios, I totally agree. Man need to improve how they treat this planet before he can possibly think about a " new" planet. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2019 2:24:00 PM
If only Man could understand this paramount truth we would certainly have a healthier attitude towards our planet dearest, Alexis. Thank you so much my friend. XXX
Date: 7/21/2019 12:54:00 PM
- Man has not made himself worthy to get a new planet ... man would destroy it in a short time - Excellent written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:20:00 PM
My dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your lovely comment! Hugs xxx
Date: 7/21/2019 11:05:00 AM
"Disease" - both a simile and a metaphor and a truth!!!! I like this one so much.
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:19:00 PM
Yes, all three, regretfully true, dear Sunlite! Thank you so much! xxx
Date: 7/21/2019 8:12:00 AM
I too earnestly agree, sadly. Excellent, important ink my dear friend. xomo
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:18:00 PM
Happy that we agree dearest, Maureen. Unfortunately for our planet and other planets though! Thank you! Hugs xxx
Date: 7/21/2019 3:08:00 AM
Well man has made a bit of a mess here I cant see it being any different on mars. Don't start me off on cans, bottles and plastic lol. Tom
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Date: 7/21/2019 3:40:00 AM
...no, my friend, Tom, I deal only with bigger things than bottles! Just planets! Haha. I see we agree that Man doesn't learn. He destroys something and when is done with it he moves on to destroy something else! Thank you!

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