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A Dozen Daisies

a dozen 
fresh daisies
eggshell white petals
with
bright yellows eyes
see the world
so clearly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 11:01:00 AM
Awesome description, those last two lines are excellent...You inspired a haiku with this one...Oh, almost forgot, it's petals...
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Date: 9/11/2009 2:28:00 PM
I love the descriptiveness of this one. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2009 11:24:00 AM
This is wonderful! Thank you for comments, and FYI I DO live in Colorado....:::Smile::: ~Trudy~
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