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A Double Handful of Haiku: Good-Bye To Summer

As seasons change we
Watch in awe as Nature works
Her silent wonders

On summer mornings
All the world is bright and fresh
And brimming with life

A fickle lover
Summer steals a kiss then runs
Straight to arms of Fall

Indian Summer
Autumn nervous in the wings
Tough act to follow

Seasonal job ad
Summer tenure ending soon
Needed temp for Fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/3/2023 10:27:00 AM
Such a lovely set of Haiku poems Jim. Love all your skilled, chosen words to describe so much. ‘Her silent wonders’ ‘ Straight to arms of fall’. Wonderful. They all fir perfectly together. Really enjoyed reading them. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you. :):)
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 11/3/2023 10:31:00 AM
Thank you, Christina.
Date: 10/30/2023 12:29:00 AM
“ Summer steals a kiss then runs” what a line that is! So creative and imaginative! One i havent read ever anywhere else! So unique and refreshing! I absolutely love the way your haiku chain flows so seamlessly! Brilliant! And so moving! Pleasure reading your work
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/30/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 10/25/2023 1:15:00 PM
these are wonderful, jim! the 3rd is my favorite...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/25/2023 1:44:00 PM
Ilene, thank you. I love it when you pick favorites.
Date: 10/25/2023 12:42:00 PM
Beautiful group of haiku. I love to write these
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/25/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thanks, Karen. They are fun...and harder than one might think.
Date: 10/25/2023 11:52:00 AM
Lovely collection of haiku..each one with heir own unique imagery..
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 10/25/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, S O.

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