A Door, Yet Not a Door

A door dwelled, but was written on it,
“Thou shalt not”.
It stood on the 4th floor like a ghost,
Threatening with a piercing signpost.

“Does the door dwell, or not?” 
Was the question that passers-by raised;
What took place in the back room yet  
Was a mystery that insiders, too, knew not.  

Hushed voices hissed outside a lot, 
Yet shrill bewail inside smothers that,
For the door debarred entrance or exit,
Deluding those from in and out.

Door was too high for those out 
And it was just a silly wall, a rampart
for those in, and it teased to be a support, 
Yet subdued claims, or pains that hurt. 

The door didn't dwell for entry or exit 
But stood simply as a towering ghost. 


*6th Place* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 21, 2020)

Sept. 20, 2020 
The Fourth Floor Of Nowhere Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor:  craig cornish
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Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Really nice take on the theme, Newton - the mystery and fear of what is behind "the door." Congratulatio9ns on your win!
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for your kind visit and the tremendously great comment!!
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 4:07 PM
- Yes !!! ... you won !!! ... Congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the kind well-wishes!!
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 9:22 AM
- Yes, it seems a little scary :) - Excellent written for this contest, Newton :) - Best wishes for a win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Thank you so much for this sweet comment and your kind wish!!
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