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A Door, Yet Not a Door

A door dwelled, but was written on it, “Thou shalt not”. It stood on the 4th floor like a ghost, Threatening with a piercing signpost. “Does the door dwell, or not?” Was the question that passers-by raised; What took place in the back room yet Was a mystery that insiders, too, knew not. Hushed voices hissed outside a lot, Yet shrill bewail inside smothers that, For the door debarred entrance or exit, Deluding those from in and out. Door was too high for those out And it was just a silly wall, a rampart for those in, and it teased to be a support, Yet subdued claims, or pains that hurt. The door didn't dwell for entry or exit But stood simply as a towering ghost. *6th Place* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 21, 2020) Sept. 20, 2020 The Fourth Floor Of Nowhere Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: craig cornish

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Date: 9/21/2020 4:25:00 PM
Really nice take on the theme, Newton - the mystery and fear of what is behind "the door." Congratulatio9ns on your win!
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Date: 9/21/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for your kind visit and the tremendously great comment!!
Date: 9/21/2020 4:07:00 PM
- Yes !!! ... you won !!! ... Congratulations so much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the kind well-wishes!!
Date: 9/21/2020 9:22:00 AM
- Yes, it seems a little scary :) - Excellent written for this contest, Newton :) - Best wishes for a win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much for this sweet comment and your kind wish!!

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