A Door In Paris

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'twas years ago I strolled thru Paris proper
          and came upon Le Pere Lachaise one night -
               that crowded cemetery meant for paupers
     soft glowing with one beam of lantern light

upon the rough stone wall there sat a fellow
          with leather pants and music meant to sing
               he spoke to me a voice, distinct and mellow
     so I would know his name: "The Lizard King"

his face seemed so familiar, though I couldn't
          recognize it 'mongst the people that I'd met
               in person, and, (though I knew that I shouldn't)
     pressed him, thinking French was what I'd get

he looked up from his manuscripts to smile
          with a soft assurance gleaming in his eyes
               and tho' my sense of French was oft' defiled
     with perfect state-side English, he replied:

"why do you look for ghosts within a graveyard?
          for death is naught but your devoted friend
               save your fears for that in life that's painful
     true freedom's waiting, patient, for the end"

he spoke about his ventures until midnight
          the concerns of music, poetry, and senses
               about all he had learned in ego's hindsight
     a yearning for the unknown present tenses

the final thing he said was quite peculiar
          and found its steady purchase in my core:
               "it's life and death that ever try to fool ya
     but in-between it all, there are The Doors"

'twas then I heard the bells of Chapelle de l'Est
          ringing sweet to mark the midnight hour
               yet, as I turned to thank him for the rest
     in the spot where he'd been sitting - just a flower

and right behind the wall there stood a gravestone
          a tiny shrine where people came to leave
               small photos of Jim Morrison, the person
     that I had talked with all that haunting eve ...

who had left me with no cause ... to NOT believe.







~ 1st Place ~  in the "Writers On The Storm" Poetry Contest, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judge & Sponsor.

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Doors" Poetry Contest, Anthony Biaanco, Judge & Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/7/2021 9:52:00 AM
I love the metaphors within, you clearly put a lot of thought into this Gregory, Dicken's as may well have liked Jim Morrison and the Doors, as they him . . . ; )
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Date: 7/30/2021 5:50:00 AM
"a yearning for the unknown present tenses"...a mentor of mine referred to those as the "ever present moment" and admonished me to pay attention.
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Date: 7/29/2021 11:59:00 PM
Amazing I loved every line...Congrats on your win Gregory :)
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Date: 7/29/2021 9:49:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... packaged with the sentiments, predicaments, and yes, poetic commitments expressed by your awesome "bardful" style... God bless you.
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Date: 7/29/2021 8:34:00 PM
Such a beautiful story behind the door. Congratulations 0n your win!
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Date: 5/19/2019 7:09:00 PM
I just got the play on words in the title, very clever!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/20/2019 12:51:00 AM
Thanks John! :-)
Date: 5/19/2019 7:08:00 PM
This is masterful G, no more superlatives left! Jim Morrison The Doors...just great!! Was it just a dream?
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/20/2019 12:51:00 AM
Thank you very much, John, I appreciate that ... no, this wasn't a dream, just an idea that Jim's larger than life and very spiritual search deserved a Charles Dickens kind of tale. Glad you liked it! :-)
Date: 5/15/2019 7:50:00 AM
Wow Greg, this gave me chills! It is written with such a beautiful flow and with such creativity. It is one of your best! Straight into my Faves with this diamond! Sure to be at the top of the winner's list! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/20/2019 12:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Connie, I worked hard on this one and enjoyed the process thoroughly ... I really had no idea what direction to take, but it seemed Jim deserved a sort of Dickens tale, and just let my pen do the story. It was fun, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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