A Dog's Life: a Place of My Own

I dIdn’t know why I had been thrown out,
I  didn’t  know what the fuss was about,
Or what I was  in trouble for
but they didn’t want me there anymore.

I was weak, frightened and somewhat tattered,
my trust and confidence  totally shattered,
there were many like me,yet I felt alone,
this large noisy shelter just wasn’t a home.

My step wasn’t as lively as it used to be
and out of my left eye I barely could see,
I wasn’t as pretty as I was before,
a sad soul behind a cold steel door.

People would look at me, then they’d walk by,
I finally gave up , didn’t bother to try,
shunning attention I hung my head low,
what would become of me I didn’t know.

One day a young voice said, “Look at her dad,
the one in the corner, she looks awfully sad,
the one that’s just lying there not making a fuss,
can we take  her home cause I think she needs us.”

“But you wanted a puppy,” the dad’s swift reply,
the boy  looked upset as he waved me goodbye,
but miracles do happen and love found it’s way,
it was me  they came back for the very next day.

For the next few years I happily spent,
good times with my family the way it was meant,
loved and cared for more than I’d ever known,
the best of a dog’s life, a place of my own.

DOG GONE CONTEST
JUNE25.2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/22/2012 9:56:00 PM
Liz, congratulations in Tanya Harrington, "Dog gone tales" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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Date: 7/20/2012 4:48:00 PM
Heart warming dog tale, Liz...Very well done!...Congratulations on your win - Tim
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Date: 7/18/2012 3:28:00 PM
Super win for you Liz...congrats !!! - Well done and a good poem . - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Tanya's "Dog Gone Tales" contest Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:44:00 PM
congrats Liz on a super first place win for this fine entry luv.
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations Liz, on your 1st place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/17/2012 12:02:00 PM
Liz just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Liz I enjoyed this very much xx
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:12:00 PM
You brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on your first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:13:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Liz! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:08:00 PM
Almost made me cry, I am glad the poor dog found a home. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/16/2012 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on this unique perspective of a doggy not wanted...how sad...enjoyed reading your talented write. gwendolen
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Date: 6/25/2012 11:13:00 AM
Liz a super poem for the contest....wish you luck and hope for a win for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/25/2012 8:33:00 AM
this is sure to be number one Liz...great write ...hugs...Joseph
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Date: 6/25/2012 7:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem, Liz. I'm glad it had a happy ending. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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