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A Doe and Her Fawn

A Doe and Her Fawn

On wobbly legs, the fawn staggers behind the doe,
Who pauses to let the newborn catch up.
The fawn appears to be just a few hours old,
As revealed by its arduous locomotion
And the white, freckled spots on its back
Melded into its butterscotch-coloured fur coat.
The fawn’s softly adoring, oversized eyes
Plead for nourishment,
And the whitetail deer doe (patient, as mothers go)
Licks her offspring, bonding and cleaning,
As it instinctively nudges her teats with its nose
To stimulate her mammary glands.

The fawn suckles the mother’s milk,
Which provides it with the nutrients to grow.
The doe stares at me without fear
And lets the fawn satiate its hunger.
Its little head bobbing and its tail flagging
As its craving is abated and its appetite satisfied;
It is contented and ready to continue its journey
In the ways of nature and survival.
The doe slowly moves on as the fawn struggles
(Those steps must seem an eternity to complete,
Requiring a great magnitude of expendable energy),
Which the doe senses, and so she lies down,
And the fawn, from on its four legs, plops down
Beside her for a much-needed rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 2:00 PM
This is beautiful and so real. Congratulations on your win.
Spilchuk Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thank you very much.
Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Lovely imagery of mother and offspring. Congrats on your placement, Dennis. Well penned.
Spilchuk Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:51 AM
I sincerely appreciate your comments and reply, thank you.
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