A Disturbing Train of Thought

The hypnotic thrum of the wheels
Drumming smoothly along the tracks
Inside the early morning hush
Broken by the rare stifled cough
The casual rustling of a newspaper
And the whisper of sporadic conversation.

A body slumped against the window
Business papers being scanned
Earpieces inviting oblivion to the outside world
Anxious glances thrown at watches.

The driver whistles quietly to himself
Glad that soon his shift will be over
Trees ,bushes,houses and bridges 
Slide past,silent observers of the passing scene.

What is that?He stiffens
The crucifixion shape on the parapet
The manual did spell out such eventualities.
Uselessly he slams on the brakes

He glimpses the inward looking eyes
The body glances off the windscreen
The brakes screech and squeal
And the acrid stench of burning flesh fills the air.


The sickening jolt throws 
Everyone awake.
Time grinds to a halt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/23/2014 4:31:00 PM
Time grinds to a halt... nasty jolt that
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Date: 12/27/2013 3:08:00 PM
Denis, drumming smoothly... Such a great line, but deep poem.... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family ... xox..Linda
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Denis Bruce
Date: 12/27/2013 4:07:00 PM
Linda,thank you for your kind words and I wish you all the joys of the season
Date: 12/21/2013 10:52:00 AM
This one sounds like someone had a very bad experience on a train be it a real one or a metaphoric one...Enjoyed reading .Sara
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Denis Bruce
Date: 12/21/2013 1:05:00 PM
Sadly a true story of recent origin
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