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A Disturbing Train of Thought

The hypnotic thrum of the wheels Drumming smoothly along the tracks Inside the early morning hush Broken by the rare stifled cough The casual rustling of a newspaper And the whisper of sporadic conversation. A body slumped against the window Business papers being scanned Earpieces inviting oblivion to the outside world Anxious glances thrown at watches. The driver whistles quietly to himself Glad that soon his shift will be over Trees ,bushes,houses and bridges Slide past,silent observers of the passing scene. What is that?He stiffens The crucifixion shape on the parapet The manual did spell out such eventualities. Uselessly he slams on the brakes He glimpses the inward looking eyes The body glances off the windscreen The brakes screech and squeal And the acrid stench of burning flesh fills the air. The sickening jolt throws Everyone awake. Time grinds to a halt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/23/2014 4:31:00 PM
Time grinds to a halt... nasty jolt that
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Date: 12/27/2013 3:08:00 PM
Denis, drumming smoothly... Such a great line, but deep poem.... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family ... xox..Linda
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Denis Bruce
Date: 12/27/2013 4:07:00 PM
Linda,thank you for your kind words and I wish you all the joys of the season
Date: 12/21/2013 10:52:00 AM
This one sounds like someone had a very bad experience on a train be it a real one or a metaphoric one...Enjoyed reading .Sara
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Denis Bruce
Date: 12/21/2013 1:05:00 PM
Sadly a true story of recent origin

Book: Shattered Sighs