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Blue Cheese and Old Pickles Poetry Contest Craig Cornish A dish of disappointment mocks the kitchen chef two anomalies sitting on his cutting board all in their glory, dumbfounded ... and unappetizing plated for aliens and not humans or for a horse that doesn’t know better this recipe’s giving him the blues and he’s seeing red where … his yellow brick road has two strangers today two lost food groups arriving earlier in hearses a funeral procession mythically carrying the deceased to his kitchen foyer … some blue cheese and an old dill that are down for an undressing of his bitter words like, fudge, where’s the beef … or better yet Mars is up there as a cloud of despair hovers over the kitchen not a spaceship as one might think darkness begetting light salt, pepper and garnishes spooked … a ready barf bag crashes this meal

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Date: 4/3/2025 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/2/2025 1:23:00 AM
After re-reading this poem, I would edit the fifth line from the bottom- change it to "as black clouds of despair hover over the kitchen." That reads better. It coincides with the other color groups-red, blue, yellow and its a simple fix/adjective that describe the imagery of the kichen. Come on Connie (lol) you silly goose you'll never be a swan.
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Date: 3/17/2025 3:14:00 PM
Ha! Who knew you had a sense of humor? Nice.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 3/18/2025 3:19:00 AM
I edited the poem and added--arriving in hearses a funeral procession, carrying the deceased to his kitchen foyer. That reads a lot better (I think). Humor? I can ride a bike. Sometimes I might fall. But I still have a good ride. Cheers.

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