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A Discreetly Broken Cloud At Sunset

Sunshine beams so directly onto a discreetly broken cloud The tree line below it beckons thee so somber so proud The cloud replies so reverently so utterly loud Won't you stay with me? I plea darkness is such a shroud

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Patrick Cornwall

Date: 6/21/2023 4:19:00 AM

Very nice and I enjoyed Patrick

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/21/2023 5:48:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment Patrick. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed it! Regards A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/13/2023 11:53:00 AM

Gorgeous writing, A.S.!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/13/2023 4:36:00 PM

The simplest love can be found in the sky! A.S.

Deb M

Date: 6/6/2023 10:52:00 PM

Nicely written AS….l really enjoyed! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/7/2023 8:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Deb! Sometimes it's the simple things of watching a cloud break apart as the sun shines through it. Warmest regards A.S.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/6/2023 6:34:00 PM

A personification monogram, oops monorhyme! Very cute and saddening. I used that form for a serious write in a contest, never again. It constricts, takes forever to get to the point, and it's way too long (Self-Existent light)! lol

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 6/6/2023 6:53:00 PM

This is entirely too adorable I was actually looking at a cloud during a sunset ;) I do love how direct you are! Warmly A.S.