Anonomus Scorpio Poet Monorhyme

A Discreetly Broken Cloud At Sunset

Sunshine beams so directly onto a discreetly broken cloud
The tree line below it beckons thee so somber so proud
The cloud replies so reverently so utterly loud
Won't you stay with me? I plea darkness is such a shroud

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Patrick Cornwall June 21, 2023 at 4:19 AM Very nice and I enjoyed Patrick Anonomus Scorpio June 21, 2023 at 5:48 AM Thank you for the compliment Patrick. Glad you stopped by and enjoyed it! Regards A.S.

Paige Hind June 13, 2023 at 11:53 AM Gorgeous writing, A.S.! Anonomus Scorpio June 13, 2023 at 4:36 PM The simplest love can be found in the sky! A.S.

Deb M June 6, 2023 at 10:52 PM Nicely written AS….l really enjoyed! Debx Anonomus Scorpio June 7, 2023 at 8:42 AM Thank you very much Deb! Sometimes it's the simple things of watching a cloud break apart as the sun shines through it. Warmest regards A.S.

I Am Anaya June 6, 2023 at 6:34 PM A personification monogram, oops monorhyme! Very cute and saddening. I used that form for a serious write in a contest, never again. It constricts, takes forever to get to the point, and it's way too long (Self-Existent light)! lol Anonomus Scorpio June 6, 2023 at 6:53 PM This is entirely too adorable I was actually looking at a cloud during a sunset ;) I do love how direct you are! Warmly A.S.