A Difficult Year

My mind wears a secret alleyway, where thoughts lead to a threshold turning my dreams into memories; I tuck them away for safekeeping. Clandestine voices sow seeds of reveries that sweep into silent stars at dusk. Concealed and wrapped up in coarse fabric, thoughts fade in the distance (sky too far to grasp). Invalid questions crowd the furthest road in my mind. It travels downhill and swerves into a river of confusion, then... leads me back home. For it has been a difficult year, one that shadowed the dark backstreets of my mind. I lay in fear; he wipes my tear. Peace in my mind’s alleyway I hope to find. a year that crowded rugged backstreets of my mind- time to drive away
September 25, 2019
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Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:28 AM
- L.L. a deeply touching poem - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcguire Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Short but says MUCH! Congrats
La France Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 4:11 PM
Lu congratulations on your win in the contest with your excellent haibun!
One Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 3:38 PM
A haibun that is very descriptive and nice haiku.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Michael Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 12:46 PM
I like the write...time to walk out the backstreets of my mind...
Adams Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 11:39 AM
can mind ever be at peace when sad memories haunt...love the way you penned this one my friend...it's a winner in my book...excellent write! :) hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:27 AM
This is simply beautiful. I love it. You penned such an exceptional poem... God bless you always and happy driving
May Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Wow Lu Loo you better take the freeway, excellent my friend
Green Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Wonderfully expressed thoughts Lu Loo. I really enjoyed this poetic journey into those backstreets.
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