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A Devil's Dalliance

An Devil's Dalliance


It was just one of those mornings?
Or at least I think it was, that is,
if I had created “morning’s” yet.
All my little angels trying out their
wings (in a strictly non-competitive
manner of course).  I was slightly
distracted by Creation at the time
so some of the details are a bit
sketchy---the “all knowing” thing
a bit exaggerated---however I did
suspect some shenanigans within
a small group.  You know, changing
the shape of the clouds, a seemingly
innocent diversion had become a
bit racy.  They were playing with
rainbows and dabbling in an
evolving plot.  Anyway, when “he”
showed me his “new” pet – the
duckbilled platypus - I had to draw
the line.  After a thorough scolding
I sent him back down to clean up
the mess he’d made.  A darkness
came over him (we call it anger now)
his wings darkened, his eyes  glared,
a putrid wind arose beneath him
(the scent of defiant rebellion).
I still remember the sting of his
scathing good-bye.  “I’ll start my
own “heaven!”.  “I’ll be bigger than
you.”  

“Until an hour before he left
I thought him beautiful”*
“I still do, for I know the
truth of who he is and wait
patiently for him to realize it.”


3/4/2016

*Arthur Miller, The Crucible
“Until an hour before the Devil fell, God thought him beautiful in Heaven”

submitted to Expand Arthur Miller’s Thought – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Julia Ward

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Date: 3/15/2016 11:10:00 AM
John, Congrats in Julia's contest.. interesting topic. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2016 12:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem John.
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Date: 3/9/2016 10:25:00 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/9/2016 12:05:00 PM
I wonder how long it will take. As Woody Allen put it: "Eternity's an awfully long time—especially towards the end. I enjoyed reading this. It's been a long time, John, since I visited your page and will have to remedy that.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment Mark. It is extremely difficult to keep up with so many poets on the soup.
Date: 3/9/2016 11:22:00 AM
Very delightful and well-written, John. I thoroughly enjoyed your tale about God and Lucifer! Congrats on your win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment. glad you enjoyed this somewhat "tongue in cheek" tale.
Date: 3/9/2016 3:09:00 AM
I enjoyed the humor in this, a well deserved fifth place win in my difficult contest. Congratulations, John. Julia, x
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John Lawless
Date: 3/9/2016 3:36:00 PM
Great contest Julia, it took me a while to figure which way to go with it. Glad the humor found its mark. Thanks for taking the time to sponsor the contest..

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