A Devil's Dalliance

An Devil's Dalliance


It was just one of those mornings?
Or at least I think it was, that is,
if I had created “morning’s” yet.
All my little angels trying out their
wings (in a strictly non-competitive
manner of course).  I was slightly
distracted by Creation at the time
so some of the details are a bit
sketchy---the “all knowing” thing
a bit exaggerated---however I did
suspect some shenanigans within
a small group.  You know, changing
the shape of the clouds, a seemingly
innocent diversion had become a
bit racy.  They were playing with
rainbows and dabbling in an
evolving plot.  Anyway, when “he”
showed me his “new” pet – the
duckbilled platypus - I had to draw
the line.  After a thorough scolding
I sent him back down to clean up
the mess he’d made.  A darkness
came over him (we call it anger now)
his wings darkened, his eyes  glared,
a putrid wind arose beneath him
(the scent of defiant rebellion).
I still remember the sting of his
scathing good-bye.  “I’ll start my
own “heaven!”.  “I’ll be bigger than
you.”  

“Until an hour before he left
I thought him beautiful”*
“I still do, for I know the
truth of who he is and wait
patiently for him to realize it.”


3/4/2016

*Arthur Miller, The Crucible
“Until an hour before the Devil fell, God thought him beautiful in Heaven”

submitted to Expand Arthur Miller’s Thought – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Julia Ward
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March 15, 2016 at 11:10 AM
John, Congrats in Julia's contest.. interesting topic. Love LINDA
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March 10, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem John.
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March 9, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Hi John, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read.
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March 9, 2016 at 12:05 PM
I wonder how long it will take. As Woody Allen put it: "Eternity's an awfully long time—especially towards the end. I enjoyed reading this. It's been a long time, John, since I visited your page and will have to remedy that.
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March 9, 2016 at 3:39 PM
Appreciate you taking the time to visit and comment Mark. It is extremely difficult to keep up with so many poets on the soup.
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Very delightful and well-written, John. I thoroughly enjoyed your tale about God and Lucifer! Congrats on your win. Sandra
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March 9, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment. glad you enjoyed this somewhat "tongue in cheek" tale.
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March 9, 2016 at 3:09 AM
I enjoyed the humor in this, a well deserved fifth place win in my difficult contest. Congratulations, John. Julia, x
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March 9, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Great contest Julia, it took me a while to figure which way to go with it. Glad the humor found its mark. Thanks for taking the time to sponsor the contest..
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