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A Desolating Future

were it was hollowed within the crumpled tissue paper thrown onto the filth drowned on truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/17/2008 1:02:00 AM
Ahoy! This is good one, although I'd change the last line with something more concrete, just to compliment the excellent imagery of the crumpled paper and the filth. Good job anyway.
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