A Dentist's Drill

Something that never gives me a thrill is having to deal with a dentist’s drill. There is a cavity he has to fill. When he sticks that needle into my mouth, it hurts like hell and I feel like going south. And he told me I wouldn’t feel a thing. That was like saying Obama is a king. Doctor, why are you so hard on me? I paid you right away. I don’t owe you money. I have brushed my teeth many times each day. You were saying I have a cavity today? Even though dentist bills are a bit too steep, it is my natural teeth that I want to keep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/6/2014 10:54:00 PM
Robert Such a silly and creative write about the one place most people don't like to visit. Thanks for the great comment on my Invisible poem.
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Date: 3/19/2012 2:55:00 AM
Ho Ho ha ha he he....I am in your boat here, Robert! I have my dentist call me in 1 mg of Ativan b4 my dental work...I take it 30 minutes b4 my appt...talk about anxiety! It's either that OR DENTURES!! ha ha Love your dental dilemma! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:36:00 AM
Just get it all done before you go on a pension! It's a killer isn't it- having these guys create so much anxiety and getting well paid for it! Your words hurt Just a bit Robert! :)
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:23:00 PM
Hubby just had a bill £750 for one tooth he is still reeling , not a happy bunny, this is good though Robert Like it.xx
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:29:00 PM
OH yes, those dentists rob you blind. I"ve had one dentist tell me I had 8 cavities then went over to another one whom I LIKE and he told me it was not true and that I was just fine. So don't believe them, Robert. Get a second opinion if they try to ever say you have lots of cavities. Good one.
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Date: 3/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
Well done, the wife and have finally found a dentist who knows his stuff and is quite pain free.
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