Xuefeng Pan Poet Free verse

A Dense Fog

A dense fog, a dense fog, it is so thick 
My eyes cannot reach the other side of the street
I looked around,  to my left, and to my right,
But I cannot see anything more than a meter wide


I know I am surrounded by a blanket of fog
But I cannot imagine how  these could take 
Such a blanket that isolated me from the world
But God! But Fate! you did it, you did it!

I seemed seeing you were snapping  fingertips  
Spreading billions of tiny droplets  into my world, 
Creating such an impenetrable cloak, 
That could shut out my  bright light 
And making me shiver in front of your rights!


Oh my God! Wow, my Fate! you did it, you did it!
Knitting the pain, loss, fear, and self-doubt 
A suffocating blanket blurring my life to this extent

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Ann Foster August 26, 2019 at 12:28 AM Be quiet my friend. The fog will lift. Clarity is in peace. Ask for HIS vision, and his light will lead... Your poem evokes great stress and loss inside. I have felt that. Once I prayed for an Angel by name. She showed up. He listened. The power of your words are great indeed. Ann Xuefeng Pan August 26, 2019 at 6:37 AM Thanks, Ann. I will try my best...