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Painting by Kamunya Wanjuki

A Deluge of Tears


Our Earth weeps waves of falling tears-
   with hope, each one will be her last
to wipe away climatic fears
   from air pollutants that amass.
 
The floods are triggered by her pain;
   her deluge of emotions pour
in torrents of a drenching rain
   to wipe the slate and start once more.

She is a living, breathing thing,
   this lovely mother, we call Earth.
But atmospheric poisons bring
   concerns to heal with clear rebirth.

The air is washed, the oceans rise,
   with cleansing tears, her deluge creeps.
Disaster goes against her will;
   she, driven by renewal, weeps.

With hope, each one will be her last
   to wipe away climatic fears
from air pollutants that amassed;
   our Earth weeps waves of falling tears.


August 29, 2016

~10th Place~
Premiere Contest: Falling
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann
Judged: 06/01/2020

~NA~
A Deluge of Tears
Sponsor: Richard Lamoreaux
Premiere Contest, "All About The Environment"
Judged: 11/25/2019

~1st Place~
Writing Challenge - December - Any poem NA'd in November 2019
Sponsor, Dear Heart- Wiishkobi Ode
Judged: 12/08/2019

~3rd Place~
Premiere Contest: A Deluge
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 09/10/2016
       
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"Air pollution can cause more droughts and floods, a new long-term study has discovered. The research from top scientists studying a decade of atmospheric data has shown how cloud and weather development are affected by aerosols in the atmosphere...the dust, soot, and additional particulates can produce intense rain, snowfall, and severe storms..."  www.earthtimes.org
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:36 AM
It is Mother Earth trying to protect herself Sandra, I agree. Beautifully penned! Congratulations on all your wins for this wake-up call to all. Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 4:22 PM
This is am excellent write Sandra! A stark reality yet full of hope and inspiration through your words. Congratulations on your win :)
Radice Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 3:11 PM
An excellent read. Thank you!
Canerdy Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 8:57 AM
So beautiful--with details so sadly true, Sandra. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Neumann Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 5:54 AM
A poignant message beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your win in my contest, Kai
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:09 AM
Well done and congrats Sandra. Hugs Rick.
La France Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, and I love the image too, well done!
Neumann Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Good stuff and very meaningful. Great write. Congratulations.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Such deep reflection...food for thought..Congrats Sunita.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Excellent, Sandra, and enlightening! Congratulations!
Scars Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement with this very truth revealing poem, well done sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 1:27 PM
Sandra, I love your personification of Mother Earth. We are killing her slowly. Congratulations on your placement in this tough contest.
Arnone Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 2:59 PM
I get that we should keep our Earth clean and healthy -- on the other hand, in a single instance the Earth may erupt with fire and poison -- or be destroyed by some other extinction event....
Daniel Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Great message, Sandra:) all the best:)
Rycroft Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Another great poem Sandra well writting and a well thought of subject x
Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Well written, Sandra - your poem echos one of my deepest concerns and I pray your write makes some fraction of a fraction of a difference. People could at least stop littering! Such worthy, timely content beautifully woven ... CayCay
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