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A Deluge of Tears

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Painting by Kamunya Wanjuki

Our Earth weeps waves of falling tears- with hope, each one will be her last to wipe away climatic fears from air pollutants that amass. The floods are triggered by her pain; her deluge of emotions pour in torrents of a drenching rain to wipe the slate and start once more. She is a living, breathing thing, this lovely mother, we call Earth. But atmospheric poisons bring concerns to heal with clear rebirth. The air is washed, the oceans rise, with cleansing tears, her deluge creeps. Disaster goes against her will; she, driven by renewal, weeps. With hope, each one will be her last to wipe away climatic fears from air pollutants that amassed; our Earth weeps waves of falling tears. August 29, 2016 Premiere Contest: Falling Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Air pollution can cause more droughts and floods, a new long-term study has discovered. The research from top scientists studying a decade of atmospheric data has shown how cloud and weather development are affected by aerosols in the atmosphere...the dust, soot, and additional particulates can produce intense rain, snowfall, and severe storms..." www.earthtimes.org

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Date: 2/17/2020 9:09:00 AM
Well done and congrats Sandra. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/10/2019 6:59:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem, and I love the image too, well done!
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Date: 9/12/2016 11:04:00 AM
Good stuff and very meaningful. Great write. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/10/2016 11:35:00 PM
Such deep reflection...food for thought..Congrats Sunita.
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Date: 9/10/2016 6:10:00 PM
Excellent, Sandra, and enlightening! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2016 5:00:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement with this very truth revealing poem, well done sweet Sandra :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2016 1:27:00 PM
Sandra, I love your personification of Mother Earth. We are killing her slowly. Congratulations on your placement in this tough contest.
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Date: 9/2/2016 2:59:00 PM
I get that we should keep our Earth clean and healthy -- on the other hand, in a single instance the Earth may erupt with fire and poison -- or be destroyed by some other extinction event....
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:28:00 AM
Great message, Sandra:) all the best:)
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:10:00 PM
Another great poem Sandra well writting and a well thought of subject x
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:31:00 AM
Well written, Sandra - your poem echos one of my deepest concerns and I pray your write makes some fraction of a fraction of a difference. People could at least stop littering! Such worthy, timely content beautifully woven ... CayCay
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