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A Delicious Deep Dish

. In her panties pardon mine me I did mean pantry her finger pointed to the cherry Mine all suddenly altered becoming imbued praying to be the benefactor of that fruit 'mongst the dimness of that pantry's light After sum sweet sibilating her point was to the flower I meant flour yes I did ;)

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Anula Aboobacker

Date: 9/12/2011 7:42:00 PM

wow!!

Daver Austin

Date: 9/12/2011 5:03:00 PM

Ah yes, the dreaded Freudian slip - knowing you, Sir James, methinks you purposely did slip. And, oh, what a dainty dish did flower my mind. Love, daver

Dalila Agtani

Date: 9/3/2011 3:46:00 AM

Wonderful humorous rhyme. Makes me smile James. Clever write. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your kind comments on my work. Dalila

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/29/2011 9:18:00 PM

Ha! That was brilliant! Always, Laura

M.I.A .

Date: 8/23/2011 2:35:00 AM

ha3. somehow i can see that mischievous glint in your eyes while you're writing this. Quite adorable actually! ;D

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/21/2011 8:37:00 PM

You are too much my friend, some hilarity is called for and you penned it so well. I truly enjoyed this delicious dish!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/21/2011 2:43:00 PM

OMW!!! I mean that in a GOOD way :) Brilliant James, well thanks for the twists and the laughter tonight.. You are a gem!! ~ love Wilma

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/21/2011 9:56:00 AM

naughty boy.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2011 5:39:00 AM

laughing out loud, james, you word twister!! hmm, your freudian slip is showing, hahaha... thumbs up! :) hugggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2011 5:29:00 PM

Oh, had a great laugh reading this poem, James. Just love the sense of humor you display here. Witty and provocative without being explicit. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2011 11:21:00 AM

James, this is one of your cleverest sex poems yet. I do believe you are a poet with a nearly one track mind. haha. I hope your mate has the same kind of mind!!

John Smith

Date: 8/20/2011 10:22:00 AM

I'm betting you 'deflowered' whatever dish she showed you, and I don't think it was your heart that exploded. Delightful poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2011 9:53:00 AM

Naughty...Sara