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A Delicate Flower Promise



I took it from his grave that day...
     a delicate, carnation bloom
         which held a special promise that
I had no thought...the power of.

My precious Dad had passed away,
     and love of God and Christian faith
          embraced me with the comfort that
at home, he was in Heaven now.

And yet, so fragile I was then...
     my firm belief, I questioned, asked,
          Dear God, I beg of you, just please,
give me a sign that he's with You.

Eyes wet with tears, I placed it then,
     at random, in a book of prose,
          and there a holy poem appeared
that lifted up my heart and soul.

Its name, "The Grave," by Robert Blair...
    revealed that always, life anew,
          does follow us past earthly death;
eternally, our souls are kept.

My flower rests inside a book
     where God’s direction was my guide.
          Mid-unknown, secret pages there, 
it granted promise to my prayer.


September 13, 2018
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations on your fine win, Sandra.
Gauthier Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Very touching and lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your most deserving top win.
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Lovely write my friend...sure to win high, Sandra...love & light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, WW, for your visit and very supportive comments. Sandra :)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 2:06 PM
" revealed that always, life anew, does follow us past earthly death; Eternally, our souls are kept." - this is exactly how my soul feels, Sandra. A beautiful tribute poem.
Haight Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Thank you very much, Caren, for your lovely, empathetic and uplifting comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
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