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A Deep Reflection

If
you looked
in my eyes
what would you see?
Would you see the pain
that I have always known?
If you look upon my words
the pain is clearly written there
but it is mingled with all the love
I still have in my heart though it's been crushed.

Copyright © Robin L. Gass | Year Posted 2009

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Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/23/2009 5:55:00 AM The difference between this and some of your earlier pieces is the hope... despite sadness and disappointments the positive comes shing through! God bless, Keith Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 1/22/2009 3:17:00 AM Robin, this is a superb Etheree. A difficult form to do, and you have made it look so easy. Love and peace, Lainie P.s. And thank you for your kind comments, they mean so much to me. Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 1/22/2009 2:26:00 AM Great words Robin, the depth of one's past is an indication of the height of their future. I'll see you at the top...Raul Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/21/2009 6:43:00 PM And, I have seen, also, "Your Beautiful Tenderness & Love," pouring out within "Your Priceless Comments" unto many others!!!~As I said unto "You" before dear lady~"You Are A Wonderful Gift & Light" within this place for others, within many many different ways!!!~So, never ever forget these amazing truths about "Your Beautiful Self!!!"~"My Love Always To You & Your Loves, Forever, John!!!"~Goodnight Gifted & Precious Robin!!!":) Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/21/2009 6:36:00 PM And, actually, I hate to see any pain that You have endured, or still do endure-for, it sincerely makes my heart sad~for as I have said, "You" have come to mean very much unto myself!!!~And yet, I love to see "Your Priceless Hearts" joyous times!!!~For they 'Always' bring joy unto my own heart for "You" dear lady!!!....{Cont} Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 1/21/2009 6:30:00 PM Wow~I could feel "Your Priceless Heart & Soul" within this deepened and sincerely expressed write here "Beautiful & Precious Robin!!!"~Looking into "Your Brightened Eyes," or "Your Lovely Face," would probably never show, the life you have known; both bitter and sweet!?~Yet, "Your Words," are the blessed vessel from which we find these things....{Cont} Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 1/21/2009 11:46:00 AM Wow Robin this is so touching. Love is remarkably forgiving. loveudo, Laurie Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 1/21/2009 11:43:00 AM a lovely and heartwarming piece of beautiful poetry. thank you for reading always together and for your comment Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 1/21/2009 9:06:00 AM Robin , I see great words that make great presentations .... You write onnnnn ... Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 1/21/2009 8:29:00 AM The voice in this piece speaks with such clarity, assured of where they have been and where they are going. Love the pain and emotion in the piece..I know its weird to say I love the pain, but the pain makes the poem work..Good work Robin. Chris. Login to Reply