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A Deep Pain

Fight with the hidden agony, to make myself a robust. Is all that I can't buy with a penny. Again, in a deep pain. Looking the trees of Autumn, I find myself proportionate to it. Proportionate to it in the manner of losing. Again, in a deep pain. Through a page of world war, I conceived about the red in the bed. Alike me, the household should have shed tears. Again, in a deep pain. Paying a visit to the companion, I see the sadness of his for his penury. Somewhere it links with my condition. Again and again in a deep pain. Some miles to walk for, Some steps to step for. Each time I should stand again and again, To fight against the deep pain.

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Date: 12/9/2019 9:20:00 AM
The repetition of 'Again, in a deep pain' has great effect on the message.
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Date: 12/8/2019 11:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work. And I was intrigued with your metaphors.
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Date: 11/17/2019 2:17:00 PM
well written, i really enjoyed reading your poem..
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Madadha Chinna
Date: 11/17/2019 9:11:00 PM
thank you, keep on supporting

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