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A Deep and Troubling Truth

Hands Stretched out like branches Reaching for the kiss of sun An army of hands, brown hands Stretched out at me Shrivelled weak hands Looking for their daily bread. Hands With nobody to hold No star close for them to touch To shake off the dust and shimmer Slowly move back to folded arms Hands that know not how to give Stretch out to touch the troubled Hands that serve only his purpose. Hands Snatching from the pot Blind hands grab the rich jasper To exchange it for some nourishment Hands that know only to grab from another Hands that serve only his purpose Looking for their daily bread.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/22/2018 9:25:00 AM
oh this is indeed a troubing truth and so prevalent in the world. It should not have to be this way. Wow, what a great way to deal with the subject, Kudzai.
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Date: 6/22/2018 6:38:00 AM
It is such a troubling truth..a profound truth you brought my attention to..keep writing, Kudzai.
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 6/22/2018 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/22/2018 6:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your skillfully written poem this morning. I especially liked the continual return to the primary theme of "hands". A very philosophical write!
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 6/22/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot Lyric Man, means a lot
Date: 6/22/2018 4:53:00 AM
Profound and moving truth that should not let anyone untouched my friend, Kudzai! God bless you for bringing that to our attention. I have written many times on the subject ! A fav for me!
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Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 6/22/2018 6:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Yes, I believe it is an issue we should stop ignoring and we must all take action to fight it

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