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A December Memento

gripped with Christmas hope hearts besought heavenly grace special gift from God as Dad** struggled for blest breath then left us midst peace of faith *Romans 15:13 - Now the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, that ye may abound in hope, through the power of the Holy Ghost. **Dad was in the ICU on December 22, 2018 until the Lord called him home on January 2, 2019. December 14, 2022 1st place, "A DECEMBER MEMENTO" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 12/24/2022.

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Ann Peck

Date: 12/26/2022 2:20:00 PM

Dear Beata, I'm so sorry about your dad. It's hard losing anyone, but especially our parents. Congratulations on First Place! ~Ann

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2022 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Sorry about your dad. It is hard to lose someone but at Christmas it is extra hard. I know I have done it. Blessings..............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/25/2022 2:03:00 AM

Dad is the memento. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2022 6:47:00 PM

One of your best poems I have seen in any of my contests, Beata. A very well written and poignant tanka. Congrats. I am sure your Dad looks down on you fondly this Christmas.